自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“没有”，再说明原因。注意语法和用词：primary school 是单数，应该用 was；表示步行上学要说 walked to school，而不是 worked to my school。可以补充一个具体细节，例如上学需要多久。

範例: No, I didn’t. My primary school was very close to my home, so I usually walked there. It only took me about ten minutes.

建議: 开头可以直接回答问题，但后面的表达不够清楚。请确认你想表达的是 bikes（自行车），而不是 bags；“vigorous”不适合描述街上的车辆。用“popular”或“common”描述自行车，并用“in the past”“nowadays”清晰比较过去和现在。避免重复 there，并补充一个具体原因或例子。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country. In the past, more people used bicycles for their daily journeys. Nowadays, however, many people prefer electric bikes or cars because they can travel longer distances more easily.

× Actually not, because my primary school were close to my home so I usually worked to my school.

✓ Actually, no. My primary school was close to my home, so I usually worked to my school.

“My primary school”是单数主语，因此 be 动词应使用“was”，不能用“were”。

× Actually not, because my primary school were close to my home so I usually worked to my school.

✓ Actually, no. My primary school was close to my home, so I usually worked to my school.

同一个因果关系中同时使用“because”和“so”会造成连词重复。可以保留“so”连接结果分句，或改为“because”引导原因分句；不要两者同时使用。

× There are so many bags in the street, especially in the past, but nowadays there there are more vigorous in the street than bikes like cars and electric bikes.

✓ There were so many bags in the street, especially in the past, but nowadays there are more vehicles on the street than bikes, such as cars and electric bikes.

“in the past”指过去的时间，因此描述当时的情况应使用过去时“were”，而不是“are”。描述“nowadays”的情况则使用现在时“are”。

× There are so many bags in the street, especially in the past, but nowadays there there are more vigorous in the street than bikes like cars and electric bikes.

✓ There were so many bags in the street, especially in the past, but nowadays there are more vehicles on the street than bikes, such as cars and electric bikes.

“there there are”中“there”重复，应删除一个。另，“there are more vigorous”缺少适当的名词，句子结构不完整；如果想表达街上的车辆更多，可以说“there are more vehicles on the street”。