自行车— Part 1 評分報告

練習Part12026-10-18 11:41:25

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Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

Yes I have a bike a child

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

Yes, I think because a very

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分數: 35.0

建議: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm là “có”, nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu: dùng “I had” thay vì “I have”. Cụm “when I was a child” giúp diễn đạt đầy đủ và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn chiếc xe đạp có màu gì hoặc bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分數: 15.0

建議: Bạn đã thể hiện ý kiến đồng ý, nhưng câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và phần “because a very” không nêu được lý do rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trọn ý trước, sau đó dùng “because” để giải thích bằng một lý do cụ thể, ví dụ xe đạp tiết kiệm chi phí hoặc phù hợp với những chuyến đi ngắn.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people also ride them for exercise.

文法

Past tense issue

× Yes I have a bike a child

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use had rather than have. Use the complete time clause when I was a child to explain when you had the bike.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes I have a bike a child

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is missing words connecting a bike with a child. Add when I was to form a complete and clear time clause.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think because a very

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The phrase after because is incomplete and does not express a complete idea. State what you think is popular, using a subject, verb, and adjective. You can omit because in this answer.

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