自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了自行车的来源和后来如何处理，内容比较完整。注意使用过去时：把“have my first bicycle”改为“got my first bicycle”，把“never use”改为“never used”。可以减少“uh”等填充词，并补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你当时骑车做什么。

範例: Yes, I got my first bicycle when I was 12, and my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. It was blue, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood. I eventually gave it to my younger brother when I stopped using it.

建議: 你直接表达了观点并给出理由，但“bikes”可能包括电动自行车，因此提到很多人使用电动自行车会与“不流行”的观点产生矛盾。建议明确区分普通自行车和电动自行车，并补充具体场景或原因。注意使用复数形式“e-bikes”，并可用“for commuting”让表达更自然。

範例: I don't think traditional bicycles are very popular in my country, especially for commuting. Many people prefer cars or e-bikes because they are faster and more convenient for getting to work. However, bicycles are still common in parks and on quiet streets.

× Yes, when I was, uh, 12 years old, I have my first, uh, bicycle and uh, my parents bought it for me.

✓ Yes, when I was, uh, 12 years old, I had my first, uh, bicycle, and, uh, my parents bought it for me.

这句话讲的是童年时发生的事情，且后半句用了过去时“bought”，因此“have”也应使用过去式“had”，以保持时态一致。

× After that I gave it to my little brother because I never use it again.

✓ After that, I gave it to my little brother because I never used it again.

“gave”说明这件事发生在过去，因此后面的“use”也应改为过去式“used”。讲述过去发生的事情时，注意同一时间背景下的动词要保持过去时。

× I don't think so because in the digital age many people use cars or E bike to go to work.

✓ I don't think so because in the digital age many people use cars or e-bikes to go to work.

这里用“cars”泛指人们使用的汽车，表达另一类交通工具时也应使用复数“e-bikes”，保持并列结构一致。