自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You answer the question directly and add relevant details about the bike. However, “an age person” is not natural English; use a clear phrase such as “quite old at the time” if that is what you mean. Also, connect the details more smoothly and avoid repeating “when I was a child” after the question has already established the time.

範例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a blue bike when I was a child. It was quite simple and inexpensive, but I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes a personal example and a reason. Keep the verb tenses consistent: say “almost everyone I knew as a child,” rather than “everyone I know when I was a kid.” Use “ride our bikes” instead of repeating “bike,” and make the final comparison more natural by saying that bikes are cheaper to buy and maintain than cars.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. When I was a child, almost everyone I knew had one, and we often rode our bikes to school or to the park together. They’re also much cheaper to buy and maintain than cars.

× It was a blue bike, not very expensive because my father was an age person.

✓ It was a blue bike, not very expensive because my father was an elderly person.

Age is a noun and cannot naturally modify person in this phrase. Use the adjective elderly or older. The revised sentence keeps the original meaning.

× I'm originally from China and almost everyone I know when I was a kid had a bike and then we would bike to school, bike to the parks together.

✓ I'm originally from China, and almost everyone I knew when I was a kid had a bike. We would then bike to school and to the parks together.

The phrase when I was a kid refers to a past period, so the verb should be knew rather than know. Using would bike is appropriate for a repeated past activity. The sentence is also divided for clarity.

× It's not very expensive because at least it's cheaper than cars.

✓ They aren't very expensive because they are cheaper than cars.

The sentence refers to bikes, a plural noun, so the plural pronoun they is needed instead of it. The plural verb are should also be used with they.