自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сначала ответьте прямо: “Yes, I did.” Исправьте грамматику: для прошлого используйте “when I was a child” и “I had a bike”. Сократите повторы и слова-паразиты; добавьте одну конкретную деталь о велосипеде или о том, как родители учили вас кататься.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike, and my parents taught me how to ride it. I loved cycling around our neighborhood once I learned.

建議: Начните с ясного ответа: “Yes, they are quite popular.” Используйте естественную конструкцию “There are a lot of people who cycle” вместо “It is in the country are…”. Объясните популярность одной-двумя конкретными причинами и избегайте преувеличения “for all your life”; велосипед требует обслуживания и иногда замены.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling to work, especially in busy areas, because it’s an affordable and convenient way to get around.

× When I were a child

✓ When I was a child

The subject I takes was, not were, in the simple past. Match the past form of be to its subject: I was, but you were.

× I have a bike

✓ I had a bike

The question asks about your childhood, a past period, so use the past tense had rather than the present tense have.

× It is in the country are a lot of people who are riding a bicycle

✓ There are a lot of people in my country who ride bicycles

Use there are to introduce the existence of plural people. The original combines It is and are in a way that creates an incorrect sentence structure. For a general habit, use ride bicycles.

× It is like a free transport that you buy at once

✓ It is like a form of transport that you buy once

Transport is generally uncountable when it refers to transportation, so a transport is not appropriate here. Form is a countable noun and takes the article a. Use once to mean one time.