自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Honestly, yes. I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride my bike for school and for some kind of building. It was a memorable action that I did in my childhood. I used to ride my bike with my friends and had.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, I sure bikes are popular in my country for example, umm, people who I saw in the streets were riding their bikes just everywhere. It is very useful for our.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 42.0建議: Ответьте прямо и избегайте повторения фразы «I had a bike». Выражение «for some kind of building» неясно; уточните, куда вы ездили, например, «to school» или «around my neighbourhood». Последнее предложение незакончено, поэтому завершите мысль. Используйте конкретную деталь и естественную связку, например «I especially remember…».
範例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike and often rode it to school or around my neighbourhood. I especially remember cycling with my friends after class, which was one of my favourite childhood activities.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 38.0建議: Исправьте грамматику в начале: скажите «Yes, I’m sure bikes are popular» или «Yes, bikes are definitely popular». Вместо расплывчатого «people… were riding their bikes just everywhere» приведите конкретное наблюдение или причину, например, что люди ездят на велосипедах на работу. Уберите заполнитель «umm» и закончите мысль: фраза «useful for our» не завершена. Свяжите объяснение с ответом с помощью «because» или «for example».
範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see people cycling to work or using bike-sharing services in busy areas. They’re convenient for short journeys and can help people avoid traffic.
文法
× I used to ride my bike for school and for some kind of building.
✓ I used to ride my bike to school and to some kind of building.
Use to to indicate a destination. For usually indicates purpose or benefit, not the place someone rides to.
× I used to ride my bike with my friends and had.
✓ I used to ride my bike with my friends.
The sentence ends with had, but had has no object or completed meaning here. Remove it unless you add the missing information, such as what you had.
× Yes, I sure bikes are popular in my country for example, umm, people who I saw in the streets were riding their bikes just everywhere.
✓ Yes, I am sure bikes are popular in my country. For example, people I saw in the streets were riding their bikes everywhere.
Sure is an adjective, so it needs the linking verb am in I am sure. The original also runs two ideas together; separating them makes the sentence structure clear.
× It is very useful for our.
✓ It is very useful for us.
Our is a possessive determiner and must come before a noun, as in our community. Use the object pronoun us after for when no noun follows.
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