自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is contradictory: you say you did not have a bike, but then mention owning a small bicycle. Start with a clear answer, and use the past tense correctly: say “I used to ride” or “I went for rides,” not “I have been a ride.” Add one specific detail about where or when you rode.

範例: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it with my friends around the streets near my home, especially at weekends.

建議: Answer directly and use “popular” to describe bikes, rather than “famous.” Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorcycles, since Yamaha and Ducati are motorcycle brands. Avoid repeating “in my country,” and support your answer with a specific reason or example. Remember to capitalize brand names and spell “Ducati” correctly.

範例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country, especially among adults. Brands like Yamaha and Ducati are well known, and many people use motorcycles because they are convenient for commuting.

× I had only a small bicycle and I have been a ride with my friends near my home.

✓ I only had a small bicycle, and I rode it with my friends near my home.

The question refers to your childhood, a finished period in the past, so use the simple past tense. 'Have been a ride' is not a correct verb phrase here; use 'rode' to describe the past action.

× Oh yes in my country the bikes are very famous for the adults like Yamaha and Dukati is so famous in my country.

✓ Oh yes, bikes are very popular among adults in my country. Yamaha and Ducati are especially famous.

Use 'among adults' to describe the group who find bikes popular. 'For the adults' does not express that relationship correctly in this context.

× Oh yes in my country the bikes are very famous for the adults like Yamaha and Dukati is so famous in my country.

✓ Oh yes, bikes are very popular among adults in my country. Yamaha and Ducati are especially famous.

'Yamaha and Ducati' names two brands, so they form a plural subject and must take the plural verb 'are,' not 'is.'