自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题且表达基本自然，但“小时候没有”和“现在想拥有”之间可以补充具体原因，让回答更完整。可以说明现在想骑车做什么，例如锻炼或通勤，并用 because 连接理由。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I’d really like to get one now because cycling would be a fun way to exercise and explore my neighbourhood.

建議: 回答中有明显重复和停顿，影响理解；“have a shared bike in the roads”以及“use our phone to use ... to bike it”也不够自然。建议先直接回答，再说明共享单车很常见，并准确描述人们用手机扫码解锁和骑行。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. You can find them along many streets, and people use a phone app to scan a code and unlock one. They’re convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I'll, I'll actually have a shared bike in the roads and everyone can use our phone to use to to to bike it to have it.

✓ Yes, there are actually shared bikes on the roads, and everyone can use their phone to unlock and ride them.

这里是在介绍所在国家共享单车的普及情况，应使用“There be”句型表达“有共享单车”。“I'll have”表示“我将拥有”，不适合表达普遍存在的情况。可以使用“There are actually shared bikes...”来描述现状。

× Yes, I'll, I'll actually have a shared bike in the roads and everyone can use our phone to use to to to bike it to have it.

✓ Yes, there are actually shared bikes on the roads, and everyone can use their phone to unlock and ride them.

表示车辆在道路上行驶或道路上有车辆时，通常用“on the roads”，而不是“in the roads”。可以记住搭配“on the road(s)”。

× Yes, I'll, I'll actually have a shared bike in the roads and everyone can use our phone to use to to to bike it to have it.

✓ Yes, there are actually shared bikes on the roads, and everyone can use their phone to unlock and ride them.

“everyone”指每一个人，后面不能用与说话者相关的“our”来指代其手机。此处可用单数“their”指代不确定性别的个人，因此应说“everyone can use their phone”。