自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear and specific detail. Avoid repeating phrases, and use the correct past-tense form: “I was,” not “I were.” You could mention what you did with the bike or a memory involving your parents.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my parents in the park, and those trips are some of my favorite childhood memories.

建議: State your opinion clearly, then support it with your observation. Use the natural phrase “bikes are popular” and say “many people ride bikes” rather than “very many people are riding a bike.” A linking word such as “because” helps connect your reason to your opinion.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because I go cycling every week and see many people riding along the paths. They seem to use bikes for both exercise and getting around.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were a child when I was a child and I have and I have many great memories with my parents when I had I had this bike

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I have many great memories with my parents from when I had this bike.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. The repeated phrases appear to be speech disfluencies, so they have been removed for clarity. Use I was when talking about yourself in the past.

× Yes, I think bike shark popular in my country because I go biking every week and when I go biking I see very many people are riding a bike

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I go biking every week, and when I go biking, I see many people riding bikes.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes. The phrase bike shark appears to be a transcription error; the context suggests bikes are. The correction also uses bikes to refer generally to what many people ride. Use plural nouns when making general statements about countable items.

× Yes, I think bike shark popular in my country because I go biking every week and when I go biking I see very many people are riding a bike

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I go biking every week, and when I go biking, I see many people riding bikes.

After see, the natural structure here is see + object + verb ending in -ing: I see many people riding bikes. Alternatively, you could say I see that many people are riding bikes. Avoid combining see directly with a clause that has its own are without using that.