自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently: say “I had” and “I rode,” not “I have” or “I blame.” Replace unclear phrases such as “do some rich” with a specific activity, and avoid repeating “a lot of friends.” Add one clear detail about where you rode or why you enjoyed it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it. When I was about ten, I rode it almost every day with my friends around my neighborhood. It was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

建議: Answer specifically about your country rather than saying bikes are popular all over the world. Use the plural “bikes” and the natural phrase “ride bikes,” not “play bike.” Support your opinion with one relevant detail, such as who uses bikes or what they use them for, and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many kids ride them around their neighborhoods for fun, while some adults use them to get to work or school. They’re convenient and relatively inexpensive.

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past period, shown by when I was a child, so use the past-tense form had rather than have.

× I have a lot of my friend.

✓ I had a lot of my friends.

A lot of my refers to multiple people, so the countable noun friend must be plural: friends. Had is also used to match the past-time context.

× A lot of friends play with me.

✓ A lot of friends played with me.

This describes what happened when the student was a child, so the past-tense form played is needed instead of play.

× Bike is popular in all the world.

✓ Bikes are popular around the world.

The sentence makes a general statement about bicycles, so use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject also takes are. Around the world is the natural prepositional phrase for this meaning.

× Bike is popular in all the world.

✓ Bikes are popular around the world.

Use around the world, rather than in all the world, to mean in many places throughout the world.

× Not special country.

✓ Not just in one particular country.

A singular countable noun such as country normally needs a determiner. The correction uses one before the singular noun country and makes the intended contrast clearer.