自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，但理由“因为我小时候要上学”不能清楚说明你为什么有自行车。建议补充自行车的用途或具体经历，并把“when I am a child”改为过去时“when I was a child”。

範例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school because it was a convenient way to get there. I also enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood at weekends.

建議: 观点明确，但理由表达不够准确：“had to go to work”应使用一般现在时来描述普遍情况；“it not only exercise the body”存在主谓和表达问题，“prove our spirit”也不自然。建议说明自行车为何受欢迎，并使用更贴切的表达，例如“get around”或“stay healthy”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to get to work or travel short distances, especially in busy cities. Cycling is also an affordable way to stay active.

× Yes, I did because I had to go to school when I am a child.

✓ Yes, I did because I had to go to school when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，主句使用过去时“had to”，因此从句中的“am”也应使用过去时“was”。描述过去的情况时，相关动词通常需要保持过去时态一致。

× Yes I do because people in our country had to go to work and it not only exercise the body but also prove our spirit.

✓ Yes, I do because people in our country have to go to work, and it not only exercises the body but also proves our spirit.

这里是在说明现在普遍存在的情况，并且回答使用了现在时“Yes, I do”，所以“had to”应改为表示一般现状的“have to”。谈论普遍事实或当前情况时，应使用一般现在时。

× Yes I do because people in our country had to go to work and it not only exercise the body but also prove our spirit.

✓ Yes, I do because people in our country have to go to work, and it not only exercises the body but also proves our spirit.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时中的谓语动词应加“-s”：将“exercise”改为“exercises”，将“prove”改为“proves”。注意，连接“not only...but also...”的两个动词应与同一个主语保持一致。