自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“有”，并统一使用过去时：把“have”改为“had”。“it's my 30th birthday”与童年经历的时间关系不清楚；如果想表达“我三岁生日时”，应说“on my third birthday”。“for my gift”可改为“as a gift”，“started it for a week”可改为“practised riding it for a week”。补充一两句具体感受即可，避免把多个意思挤在一个长句中。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me a blue one for my third birthday, and I loved it. I practised riding it for about a week before I could keep my balance.

建議: 开头直接回答“是的，很受欢迎”，并使用自然表达，例如“Bikes are quite popular”。“everyone knows it”不能准确表达“很多人骑自行车”；“Rd.”不适合口语回答，可说“on the roads”。最后一句意思不清，可以具体说明骑车时的感受，例如享受微风。用“because”或“for example”连接理由，并补充一个具体场景。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can often see people cycling in parks and on the roads, especially at weekends. I think many people enjoy riding because it is a convenient way to get around and they can feel the breeze.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子说的是“小时候”，属于过去时间，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。回答过去的经历时，注意让动词时态与时间表达保持一致。

× it's my 30th birthday

✓ It was my 30th birthday.

这句话讲述的是过去发生的事情，因此现在时 is 应改为过去式 was。

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child, it's my 30th birthday, my father gave me a blue bike for my gift.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was my 30th birthday, and my father gave me a blue bike as a gift.

原句用逗号连接多个完整句子，造成句子结构不当。应将独立句分开，或使用 and 等连接词。表达“作为礼物”时，通常说 as a gift。

× Yes it seemed everyone knows it

✓ Yes, it seems everyone knows about them.

这里是在回答自行车现在是否受欢迎，应使用一般现在时，所以 seemed 应改为 seems。另外，谈论自行车时用 them 指代 bikes 更合适；know about 表示“了解、知道……的存在”。

× in the park or Rd.

✓ in the park or on the road

表示在道路上骑行或看到骑车的人，通常用 on the road。注意使用完整、清楚的表达，避免用不明确的缩写。

× you can see the bike rider everywhere

✓ you can see bike riders everywhere

这里泛指各处都能看到许多骑车的人，因此应使用复数 bike riders。泛指复数名词时，通常不需要在前面加 the。