自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using the past tense: “Yes, I did.” Correct “I were” to “I was,” “a pink color” to “pink,” and “so much accident” to “many accidents.” Add one clear, specific detail about the bike or a memory. Keep the answer to no more than five sentences, and avoid unclear phrases; if you mean your mother bought it for you, say so directly.

範例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood. I had a few accidents while learning, but I still remember that bike fondly.

建議: Give a clear opinion first, such as “No, not particularly.” Use “bikes” or “cycling” rather than “it,” and explain why they are not common with a specific detail, such as traffic or a lack of bike lanes. Correct “in future” to “in the future” and avoid suggesting that the country must become more developed before people can cycle; you could instead mention safer routes or better infrastructure.

範例: No, bikes are not particularly popular in my country. Many people prefer to drive, partly because busy roads can make cycling feel unsafe. However, I think more people would ride bikes if cities built safer cycle lanes.

× Yes I have AI had a bike when I were child and it was a pink color.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was pink.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. Also, a child needs an article. The phrase AI appears to be a transcription artifact, so it has been omitted.

× Yes I have AI had a bike when I were child and it was a pink color.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was pink.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child: I was a child. In general, use a or an with a singular countable noun when referring to it for the first time.

× I had so much accident with it but it's still my favorite bicycle when I was a kid and I still have many memories of it.

✓ I had so many accidents with it, but it is still my favorite bicycle, and I still have many memories of it.

Accident is a countable noun. Use many with its plural form, accidents, rather than much with the singular form. Use many with plural countable nouns and much with uncountable nouns.

× My mom and what bite me above me the the cycle so I really love it.

✓ My mom bought me the bicycle, so I really love it.

Bought is the simple past form of buy and is appropriate for an action completed in the past. The original wording appears to contain transcription errors; this correction reflects the likely intended meaning.

× Now I wish that they were popular in my country, people don't use it usually like practice sports of bicycle or biking them.

✓ I wish bikes were popular in my country. People do not usually use them for exercise or cycling.

Bikes is plural, so use the plural pronoun them rather than it. Use them consistently when referring back to bikes.

× Now I wish that they were popular in my country, people don't use it usually like practice sports of bicycle or biking them.

✓ I wish bikes were popular in my country. People do not usually use them for exercise or cycling.

Usually normally comes before the main verb use in a negative sentence: do not usually use. Place frequency adverbs such as usually before the main verb, but after an auxiliary verb when applicable.

× Now I wish that they were popular in my country, people don't use it usually like practice sports of bicycle or biking them.

✓ I wish bikes were popular in my country. People do not usually use them for exercise or cycling.

The original joins two complete thoughts with only a comma, creating a comma splice. Separate them with a period, or join them with a suitable conjunction.

× So I wish in future my country will be more developed to be able to ride a bicycle in the routes.

✓ I wish my country would become more developed in the future, so people could ride bicycles on the roads.

For a desired or hypothetical future change, use would after wish rather than will. Could also expresses the resulting possibility. Use people as the subject of ride, since a country cannot literally ride a bicycle.

× So I wish in future my country will be more developed to be able to ride a bicycle in the routes.

✓ I wish my country would become more developed in the future, so people could ride bicycles on the roads.

Use on the roads when referring to the surface where bicycles are ridden. In the routes is not the natural preposition phrase in this context.