自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then describe the toy clearly. “A ride-on toy car” is more natural than “a car for children,” and the age range should be stated clearly. Avoid fillers such as “like” and “uh”; one or two supporting details are enough.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. Instead, I had a small ride-on toy car, which I used when I was about two to eight years old.

建議: State your opinion confidently in the present tense: use “I don’t think…” rather than “I didn’t think…”. Make the subject and verb agree (“bikes are”), and replace the unclear rhetorical question with a specific example or reason. Avoid repeating words and fillers.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in busy cities. However, you can still see people riding them for exercise or in parks, where there is less traffic.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a car for children's, like, uh, very small color for children between, uh, eight or two, 12 years old.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a car for children between eight and twelve years old.

Children is already the plural form of child. In this sentence, the car is intended for children, so use for children rather than for children's. Use the plural noun without an apostrophe when referring to children generally.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a car for children's, like, uh, very small color for children between, uh, eight or two, 12 years old.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a car for children between eight and twelve years old.

Use between with and to connect the two endpoints of an age range. Say between eight and twelve, not between eight or twelve.

× I didn't think that and from my perspective, bikes in our country is not so popular, but who, who is fascinated to ride the bikes? Uh, they, you can, I can like see them.

✓ I don't think so. From my perspective, bikes are not very popular in our country, but I can see people who are fascinated by riding bikes.

The question asks about the general popularity of bikes, so use the present tense: I don't think so. Use the past tense only if you are describing a past opinion or event.

× I didn't think that and from my perspective, bikes in our country is not so popular, but who, who is fascinated to ride the bikes? Uh, they, you can, I can like see them.

✓ I don't think so. From my perspective, bikes are not very popular in our country, but I can see people who are fascinated by riding bikes.

Bikes is plural, so it takes the plural verb are, not is. Match the verb to the subject: bikes are.

× I didn't think that and from my perspective, bikes in our country is not so popular, but who, who is fascinated to ride the bikes? Uh, they, you can, I can like see them.

✓ I don't think so. From my perspective, bikes are not very popular in our country, but I can see people who are fascinated by riding bikes.

The relative pronoun who refers here to plural people, so use are rather than is. Make sure the verb agrees with the person or people who it refers to.

× I didn't think that and from my perspective, bikes in our country is not so popular, but who, who is fascinated to ride the bikes? Uh, they, you can, I can like see them.

✓ I don't think so. From my perspective, bikes are not very popular in our country, but I can see people who are fascinated by riding bikes.

Use fascinated by before a noun or an -ing form when describing what interests someone. For example, say fascinated by riding bikes.