自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsınız ve bisikletinizin rengi ile kimin aldığı gibi ilgili ayrıntılar vermişsiniz. Ancak “big we wheels” ve “writing box bikes” ifadeleri anlaşılmıyor; muhtemelen “big wheels” ve “riding bikes” demek istediniz. Geçmişten bahsederken zaman uyumuna dikkat edin: “I enjoyed riding it” daha doğal olur. “Uh”, “like” ve tekrarları azaltıp yanıtı birkaç net cümleyle düzenleyin.

範例: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me when I was in sixth grade, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

建議: Bisikletlerin popüler olduğunu belirterek soruya yanıt vermiş ve ulaşım seçeneklerinin sınırlı olmasını neden olarak sunmuşsunuz. Fakat “I would absolutely agree with this idea” bu soru için doğal değil; “Yes, they’re quite popular” diyebilirsiniz. “Public transformation” yerine “public transportation” kullanın. Nedeninizi daha açık ifade edip bir kullanım örneği ekleyin; “like” gibi dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, partly because public transportation is limited in some areas. Many people use bicycles or scooters for short trips, such as commuting to work or going to nearby shops.

× I was enjoying writing box bikes so much umm, that, that days.

✓ I was enjoying riding bikes so much in those days.

Those is used with the plural noun days; that is used with a singular noun. Use in those days to refer to a period in the past. Riding is also the appropriate verb for using a bike, rather than writing.

× We don't have much public transformation options.

✓ We don't have many public transportation options.

Options is a countable plural noun, so use many rather than much. Much is generally used with uncountable nouns. Transportation is the appropriate word for public travel services.