自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear supporting detail. Use past tense consistently ("had," "liked," and "rode"), avoid repeating the same idea, and finish your sentence. For example, mention where you rode or who you rode with.

範例: Yes, I had two bikes when I was a child. I loved riding them, especially at the weekends when my family and I went cycling in the forest.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Use natural plural forms such as "families," "people," and "children," and say "a very good hobby." Avoid fillers and make the relationship between your reason and opinion clear.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially among families and children. Cycling is an enjoyable and healthy hobby, and many people ride bikes in parks or on weekends.

× I have two bikes when I was young.

✓ I had two bikes when I was young.

The phrase when I was young refers to a completed period in the past, so use the past-tense form had. When describing past experiences, make sure the verb tense matches the time expression.

× I really like to ride on my bike when I was small.

✓ I really liked to ride my bike when I was small.

The past time expression when I was small requires the past-tense verb liked. Keep the main verb in the past when talking about a childhood habit.

× My family and I were riding bikes at forests.

✓ My family and I were riding bikes in the forests.

Use in, rather than at, to describe being among trees in a forest. Use in the forest or in forests when referring to that location.

× I think it's very good hobby.

✓ I think it's a very good hobby.

The singular countable noun hobby needs an article. Use a before it because hobby begins with a consonant sound.

× As a families, peoples and I children love to ride a bike.

✓ Families, people, and children love to ride bikes.

People is already plural, so do not add -s to make peoples when referring to people generally. Families and children are correctly plural here. Use plural bikes when describing a general activity. The phrase as a does not fit this plural list.

× As a families, peoples and I children love to ride a bike.

✓ Families, people, and children love to ride bikes.

Do not use the singular article a before the plural noun families. For a general statement, say families, people, and children without an article.