自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，例如说小时候有一辆自行车。接着补充是谁买的、是什么时候买的，或你如何使用它。避免重复“I have a bike”，并注意使用过去时，如“had”和“bought”。“She bought me the bike for a price”表达不自然；如果想说妈妈花钱买车，可以直接说“She bought it for me”。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was my first bike, and my mum bought it for me when I was about seven. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood.

建議: 开头直接回答“是的”，然后说明自行车受欢迎的原因，并补充一个具体用途或场景。你可能想表达自行车是方便的交通工具；“be a translator”是“当翻译”，与交通出行的意思不符。可以使用“a convenient way to get around”或“for commuting”等表达，并用“because”连接理由。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a convenient way to get around. Many people ride them to work or school, especially for short journeys. They are also cheaper than driving a car.

× for things I have a bike when I when I was a child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

这里说的是童年时的经历，时间发生在过去，因此要用一般过去时。动词 have 的过去式是 had。

× my first bike I remember and my mom bought me the bike

✓ I remember my first bike, and my mom bought it for me.

原句中“I remember”放在“my first bike”之后，语序不正确。英语中通常先说主语，再说谓语和宾语；后半句用 it 代替前面提到的自行车，表达更自然。

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country it's convenient to be a translator like translate transform job

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country. They are convenient for transportation, such as commuting to work.

原句把两个独立句子直接连接起来，造成句子结构问题；应在“country”后断句。另外，“it's convenient to be a translator like translate transform job”结构不完整、意思不清。可用“They are convenient for transportation, such as commuting to work”表达骑自行车出行方便，例如方便通勤。