自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车；描述童年经历时用过去时，例如用 “had” 和 “used to ride”，不要反复重复 “I will play”。“biscuits” 在这里不合适，可以改成 “ride my bike”。最后补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或和谁一起骑。

範例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I used to ride it with my family in the park at weekends, and I always felt happy and excited.

建議: 开头直接表明自行车是否受欢迎，并使用准确表达 “riding bikes” 或 “cycling”，不要说 “ride bias”。说明理由时用完整、简洁的句子，避免重复 “is”；可以补充你观察到的骑车人群或骑车原因。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I see many young people cycling to school every day because it is an affordable and convenient way to travel.

× Yes, I have a bike when I chose in my child I will play I will play biscuits a bicycle with my family and I will have very happy and joyed.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode a bicycle with my family, and I was very happy.

这段话描述的是童年经历，应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had，将 was 用于描述“小时候”，并将表示骑车和感受的动词改为过去式 rode 和 was。回答过去的问题时，要保持主要动词的时态一致。

× I will have very happy and joyed.

✓ I was very happy.

happy 是形容词，描述人的感受时应使用 be 动词；joyed 在这里不是恰当的形容词。可以说 I was very happy，或 I felt very happy。

× Yes, I think ride bias is very popular in my country because I go to school is every day is I can see very more young people is robust go to the school so it's very popular.

✓ Yes, I think riding bikes is very popular in my country because I go to school every day and see many young people riding bikes to school.

原句把多个意思用 is 连在一起，造成句子结构混乱。表达“骑自行车”时，可用 riding bikes 作主语；表达日常习惯时，可说 I go to school every day。建议先用 because 引出原因，再用 and 连接相关内容，避免重复添加不需要的 is。

× I can see very more young people.

✓ I can see many young people.

more 表示“更多”，不能与 very 这样搭配。young people 是可数名词复数，表示“许多年轻人”时可用 many；也可以说 many more young people，表示“多得多的年轻人”。