自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也补充了买车的时间和是谁买的。注意这是在回忆童年，时态要统一使用过去时：将“Yes I do”改为“Yes, I did”，将“love”改为“loved”。句子可以拆开，并用“because”或“so”连接理由，让表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was ten, and it quickly became my favorite toy. I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: 观点明确，也提到了通勤、上学和锻炼等具体用途。不过，第一句过长，建议拆分并用“for example”补充例子。“in the weekend”应改为“at the weekend”或“on weekends”；表达骑车去上班可说“ride bikes to work”。最后一句有明显语法错误，应改为“they think cycling is a good way to exercise”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially in busy cities. Others cycle at the weekend because they think it’s a convenient way to get some exercise.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

考官用过去时询问你小时候是否有自行车（Did you have...），回答也应使用过去时 did，而不是现在时 do。

× When I was 10 years old my father bought a bike and it was my favorite toy and I love it very much.

✓ When I was 10 years old, my father bought a bike, and it was my favorite toy. I loved it very much.

这句话描述的是十岁时的经历，整段应使用过去时。love 应改为 loved，与 was 和 bought 保持时态一致。

× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because many people ride bikes, go to work or go to school and some of them will ride bikes in the weekend.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because many people ride bikes to work or school, and some of them will ride bikes on the weekend.

表示“在周末”时，通常用 on the weekend（美式英语）或 at the weekend（英式英语），不能说 in the weekend。

× They think that ride bicycles is are a way of doing exercise.

✓ They think that riding bicycles is a way of doing exercise.

动词短语作主语时，动词通常要用 -ing 形式。因此应说 riding bicycles，而不是 ride bicycles。

× They think that ride bicycles is are a way of doing exercise.

✓ They think that riding bicycles is a way of doing exercise.

从句中 is 和 are 重复使用，造成句子结构错误。此处只需要一个系动词；主语 riding bicycles 是单数概念，因此使用 is。