自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明大约几岁开始骑，以及和谁、在哪里骑。注意说“ride a bike”，不要说“play a bicycle”；“when I was five”表示“我五岁时”，而不是“with my five years ago”。句子中信息较混乱，建议用一到两句表达清楚。

範例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was five. I often rode it in Moon Park with my younger sister.

建議: 先明确回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，然后给出一个清楚、具体的原因，例如方便通勤、锻炼身体或周末出游。避免把多个不相关的想法堆在一起；使用“because”连接原因，并注意主谓一致和完整句子。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to nearby places because they are convenient and affordable. Some people also enjoy cycling in parks with their friends or family.

× Yes, I played a bicycle with my five years ago and Moon Park with my sister, little sister.

✓ Yes, I rode a bicycle when I was five, and I went to Moon Park with my little sister.

原句中“with my five years ago”缺少完整的年龄表达，导致句子结构不完整；后面的“and Moon Park”也缺少谓语动词。可以说“when I was five”（当我五岁时），并用“went to”表达去公园。

× Yes because the people like child I like with my boyfriend together go to the park All together pray the blessings.

✓ Yes, people like riding bikes. I like going to the park with my boyfriend, and we pray for blessings together.

原句把多个意思连在一起，缺少清晰的句子边界和完整的句子结构，读者难以理解各部分之间的关系。建议把不同意思拆成完整句子，并用逗号和连词连接相关内容。

× Yes because the people like child I like with my boyfriend together go to the park All together pray the blessings.

✓ Yes, people like riding bikes. I like going to the park with my boyfriend, and we pray for blessings together.

这里的“child”泛指孩子这一类人时，应使用复数“children”。注意“child”的复数形式是不规则变化：child → children。

× Yes because the people like child I like with my boyfriend together go to the park All together pray the blessings.

✓ Yes, people like riding bikes. I like going to the park with my boyfriend, and we pray for blessings together.

“pray”表示“祈求某事”时，通常使用“pray for something”，所以应说“pray for blessings”，而不是“pray the blessings”。