自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，但时态错误：谈过去的童年经历应使用一般过去时，将“have”改为“had”。可以再补充一个具体细节，例如你几岁开始骑车、骑车的地点或用途，让回答更完整自然。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用清晰的原因和具体场景支持观点。“the house”在这里应为“health”；“the riding a bike”应改为“riding a bike”。避免使用“uh”和重复连接词“so and”，并注意“nowadays”不能与“yes”后面的句子生硬连接。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise because cycling is good for their health, and it can also be a convenient way to get around in busy cities.

× Of course I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此表示“拥有”的动词也要用过去式。应将“have”改为“had”。

× Yes, nowadays and more and more people uh, think the house is extremely important, so and they think the riding a bike is helpful for their health.

✓ Yes. Nowadays, more and more people think the house is extremely important, and they think riding a bike is helpful for their health.

“Nowadays”后不需要用“and”连接“more and more people”；后面的“so and”也把两个连词错误地连用。可以用句号结束前一部分，再用“and”连接后面两个并列想法。

× Yes, nowadays and more and more people uh, think the house is extremely important, so and they think the riding a bike is helpful for their health.

✓ Yes. Nowadays, more and more people think the house is extremely important, and they think riding a bike is helpful for their health.

“riding a bike”是动名词短语，在这里作“think”的宾语，不需要在前面加定冠词“the”。应删去“the”，直接说“think riding a bike is helpful”。