自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，也提供了年龄、颜色和骑车场景等具体细节。注意拼写和词语搭配：“back”应为“bike”，“try it”应为“ride it”，“childrenhood”应为“childhood”；“activity”应改为复数“activities”，因为这里谈的是一类活动。可用“when I was seven”让表达更自然，并用“which was one of my favorite childhood activities”连接补充信息。

範例: Yes, I did. I got a small red bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends every afternoon. It was one of my favorite childhood activities.

建議: 回答切题，提到了避开交通拥堵和省钱，也举了学生与上班族的例子。请将“short distance”改为“short distances”；“ride back”应为“ride bikes”。“for Iqs”意思不清楚，建议换成明确且相关的理由，例如“for health and environmental reasons”。连接时间变化时可用“Recently, ...”使句子更清晰。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they help people avoid traffic and save money. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances to school or work. Recently, more people have started riding bikes for health and environmental reasons.

× ..., which was one of my favorite childrenhood activity.

✓ ..., which was one of my favorite childrenhood activities.

“one of my favorite”后面应接可数名词复数，因此“activity”应改为“activities”。

× For example, students and office workers often cycle short distance...

✓ For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances...

这里泛指骑行的距离，且“distance”是可数名词，因此应使用复数形式“distances”。