自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“有”，并保持过去时态一致：讲童年经历时用 had、gave、loved、brought。注意被动语态应为“was given to me”，但这里用主动表达更自然。删去重复的“Oh, amazing”和过多填充词，并说明自行车的特点或你当时如何使用它，让细节更清楚。

範例: Yes, I did. My grandfather gave me my first bike when I was little. It was a bright red bike, and I was thrilled because I rode it around our neighborhood almost every day.

建議: 回答切题，但内容太简短，而且“of course”略显生硬。可以补充一个具体原因或例子，例如共享单车方便、适合短途出行，或人们骑车通勤。使用一个连接词把观点和细节连起来。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially in cities. For example, many people use shared bikes to get to a nearby subway station because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× Yeah, I do.

✓ Yeah, I did.

问题询问的是过去（“Did you have...?”），回答时也应使用过去时。这里把现在时助动词“do”改为过去时“did”。建议回答时先留意问题中的时态，并保持问答时态一致。

× When I was a little kid, I have a bike which given from my grandfather.

✓ When I was a little kid, I had a bike that was given to me by my grandfather.

“When I was a little kid”表示过去，因此“have”应改为过去式“had”。建议根据句中的过去时间表达来选择动词时态。

× When I was a little kid, I have a bike which given from my grandfather.

✓ When I was a little kid, I had a bike that was given to me by my grandfather.

“which given”缺少被动语态中的 be 动词。过去时被动语态的结构是“was/were + 过去分词”，所以应说“that was given”。建议检查被动语态是否包含 be 动词和过去分词。

× When I was a little kid, I have a bike which given from my grandfather.

✓ When I was a little kid, I had a bike that was given to me by my grandfather.

这里表达“祖父把自行车送给我”，应使用“give something to someone”；说明赠送者时用“by my grandfather”，不说“given from my grandfather”。建议记住被动表达“be given to someone by someone”。

× My grandfather love me so much that then he just, uh, drop off his work and one day he brought me a new bike.

✓ My grandfather loved me so much that then he just, uh, dropped off his work, and one day he brought me a new bike.

这句话讲述童年时发生的事情，整体应使用过去时。因此，“love”应改为“loved”，“drop”应改为“dropped”。建议讲过去的经历时，检查句中所有主要动词是否都与过去时间一致。