自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了祖母的帮助和学骑车时摔倒的经历，内容有一定细节。注意语法搭配：应说“with the help of my grandmother”，而不是“and the help of”。“ride a bike”和“bike”重复较多，可用代词或更简洁的表达替换。建议按“直接回答—具体经历—感受”的顺序组织，控制在两三句内。

範例: Yes, I did. My grandmother helped me learn how to ride, although I fell a few times at first. Once I got the hang of it, I really enjoyed cycling around my neighbourhood.

建議: 回答给出了共享单车、价格便宜和天气适宜等理由，信息比较具体。不过句子过长，多个理由用“and”连接，结尾的“I think so”也重复了开头。注意语法：泛指共享单车时用复数“them”；“到处都能租”可表达为“rent one and ride it almost anywhere”。建议拆成两句，并用“also”或“especially”连接补充信息。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. There are plenty of shared bikes, which are inexpensive to rent, and many people enjoy cycling when the weather is pleasant.

× I learned how to ride a bike and the help of my grandmother and I fell to the ground sometimes, but ultimately I learned how to ride a bike and had a really great time with the bike.

✓ I learned how to ride a bike with the help of my grandmother and I fell to the ground sometimes, but ultimately I learned how to ride a bike and had a really great time with the bike.

表示“在祖母的帮助下”时，应该用固定搭配“with the help of”。原句中的“and the help of”介词使用错误。建议记住“with the help of someone”这一表达。

× Yes, I think so, because there are a lot of shared bikes in our city and you can rent it to everywhere you want at a very low price and people love to ride a bike when the weather is good, so I think so.

✓ Yes, I think so, because there are a lot of shared bikes in our city and you can rent them wherever you want at a very low price and people love to ride a bike when the weather is good, so I think so.

“shared bikes”是复数，因此后面指代这些自行车时应使用复数代词“them”，不能用单数“it”。建议确认代词所指的名词是单数还是复数，并保持一致。

× Yes, I think so, because there are a lot of shared bikes in our city and you can rent it to everywhere you want at a very low price and people love to ride a bike when the weather is good, so I think so.

✓ Yes, I think so, because there are a lot of shared bikes in our city and you can rent them wherever you want at a very low price and people love to ride a bike when the weather is good, so I think so.

表示“在任何你想去的地方”时，应使用“wherever you want”，而不是“to everywhere you want”。“wherever”已经表示地点，不需要在前面加“to”。建议使用“wherever + 主语 + 动词”表达“无论在哪里”。