自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I had a small pink bike when I was a child. I can remember this time I was very excited and happy for this bike. I would now. Nowadays I can't read a bike, but I would like to do again.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Nowadays, bikes are popular in my country, especially Electro bikes, because people use these cars when they want to go somewhere because the taxis are really expensive today uh probably 5 to 11 minutes. It's really sounds really expensive, but uh compared to other countries, bikes are still.
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Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 45.0建議: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsın ve çocukluk bisikletinin rengini belirtmişsin. Ancak “I can remember this time” ve “I was happy for this bike” ifadeleri doğal değil; “I remember how excited I was to get it” diyebilirsin. “I can't read a bike” yerine “I can't ride a bike” kullanmalısın. Son kısmı tamamlayıp bisiklete yeniden binmek istediğini açıkça söyle; duraksamaları ve yarım kalan cümleleri çıkar.
範例: Yes, I had a small pink bike when I was a child. I remember how excited I was when I got it, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood. I don’t ride a bike these days, but I’d love to start again.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 25.0建議: Görüşünü belirtmişsin ancak yanıtın sonu tamamlanmamış ve bazı ifadeler anlamı belirsizleştiriyor. “Electro bikes” yerine “electric bikes” veya “e-bikes”, “these cars” yerine “these bikes” kullan. Taksi ücretleriyle ilgili açıklamanı kısa ve net bir neden-sonuç ilişkisiyle bağla; “5 to 11 minutes” ifadesi soruyla bağlantılı görünmüyor, bu nedenle çıkar. Ülkenle diğer ülkeleri karşılaştıracaksan karşılaştırmayı tamamla ve en fazla birkaç destekleyici ayrıntı ver.
範例: Yes, bikes, especially electric bikes, are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because taxis can be expensive. They’re also a convenient way to get around in busy areas.
文法
× I would now.
✓ I would like to ride one again.
The modal would needs a main verb, but the sentence ends before one is given. Complete the thought with a main verb, such as would like to ride.
× Nowadays I can't read a bike, but I would like to do again.
✓ Nowadays, I can't read a bike, but I would like to do it again.
The phrase do again is incomplete because do needs an object here. Add it to refer to the activity. Note that read is not a grammar error from the supplied list; if you meant riding a bike, use ride instead.
× It's really sounds really expensive, but uh compared to other countries, bikes are still.
✓ It really sounds expensive, but compared with other countries, bikes are still popular.
It's and sounds cannot be used together in this structure: remove the unnecessary be verb and say It really sounds. The final clause also needs a complement after are to complete its meaning; for example, popular.
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