自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再说明原因。注意过去时和动词搭配：用“wasn't good at riding”，而不是“I'm not good at ride”；“小时候很难”可说“it was difficult for me”。减少重复和填充语“you know”。另外注意“bike”的发音，避免被听成“vibe”。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wasn’t very good at riding, so I found it difficult to learn. I usually walked or took the bus instead.

建議: 回答方向正确，但“Viagra”与“bikes”意思完全不同，应注意“bikes”的发音。具体说明共享单车时，用“shared bikes”；解锁步骤可说“scan a QR code with your smartphone”，不是“put on your smartphone”或“score the ID card”。结尾句不完整，请用清楚的结果收尾，并控制在几句以内。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially shared bikes in big cities. You can unlock one by scanning a QR code with your smartphone. They’re convenient for short journeys, so many people use them to get around.

× I didn't have a vibe when I was a child because I I'm not good at ride a bike.

✓ I didn't have a vibe when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding a bike.

“be good at”中的“at”是介词，后面应接名词或动名词，因此“ride”要改为“riding”。另外，句子描述童年情况，应使用过去时“wasn't”，而不是“I'm”。

× I didn't have a vibe when I was a child because I I'm not good at ride a bike.

✓ I didn't have a vibe when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding a bike.

句子谈论的是童年时的情况，时态应保持一致。把现在时“I’m”改为过去时“I wasn’t”。

× It's really difficult for me when I was a kid.

✓ It was really difficult for me when I was a kid.

“when I was a kid”指过去的时间，因此描述当时的困难也应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。

× You know, in China we have the shared bike in many cities.

✓ You know, in China we have shared bikes in many cities.

这里泛指中国许多城市里的共享单车，不是某一辆特定的单车，所以不需要定冠词“the”，并且应使用复数“bikes”。

× You can ride a bike in just for some.

✓ You can ride a bike in just a few steps.

“in just for some”结构不完整：“in”和“for”不能这样连用，且“some”后面缺少被修饰的名词。可以根据语境说“in just a few steps”（只需几步操作）。