自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，但“of course”略显简单，也没有提供具体信息。可以补充一两句说明你什么时候骑车、骑车做什么，或描述那辆自行车，让回答更自然、更完整。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

建議: 回答中有较多填充词（如“uh”和“you know”），表达反复且句子没有说完。“I think it's probably in my country”结构不正确，时间表达“in 20 years ago”也不自然。先明确回答是否流行，再用“especially”“because”等连接词补充具体原因或对比；注意使用完整、清晰的句子。

範例: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially among children. Many adults also cycle for exercise or short commutes, although fewer people use bikes for daily transport than they did twenty years ago.

× Yeah, I think it's probably in my country, especially in, uh, 20 years ago and, uh, today, you know, uh, I think, uh, it's popular, uh, uh, in the children period, but most of the adult the.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are probably popular in my country. They were popular 20 years ago and are still popular today. I think they’re especially popular among children.

这里的“it”指代不清，而且前文谈论的是复数的“bikes”，应使用“they”。可先明确主语，再用“they”指代它，避免单复数不一致或指代含糊。

× Yeah, I think it's probably in my country, especially in, uh, 20 years ago and, uh, today, you know, uh, I think, uh, it's popular, uh, uh, in the children period, but most of the adult the.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are probably popular in my country. They were popular 20 years ago and are still popular today. I think they’re especially popular among children.

“20 years ago”前不需要加介词“in”；“在儿童中受欢迎”应说“popular among children”，而不是“in the children period”。表达某个过去时间时可直接使用“20 years ago”；表达某个群体时常用“among”。

× Yeah, I think it's probably in my country, especially in, uh, 20 years ago and, uh, today, you know, uh, I think, uh, it's popular, uh, uh, in the children period, but most of the adult the.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are probably popular in my country. They were popular 20 years ago and are still popular today. I think they’re especially popular among children.

“most of the adult”中的“adult”如果指“大多数成年人”，需要用复数“adults”，例如“most adults”。原句最后“but most of the adult the”似乎说到一半就中断了，因此无法准确补全后续意思。