自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答有直接回应，也提供了骑车的时间、地点、同伴和原因，内容基本相关。但“bag”应改为“bike”；“I were”应改为“I was”，“I finish”应改为过去时“I finished”。“I can stress my school”表达不自然，应说“relieve my academic stress”或“reduce the stress from school”。建议减少重复词（“very, very”“And”）和语气停顿，并使用“because/so”连接句子，使答案更流畅。

範例: Absolutely. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after finishing my homework. It was a lot of fun and helped me relieve the stress from school.

建議: 回答观点明确，也给出了交通拥堵这一合理原因，但语法和表达问题较多。“bikes”是复数，后面应使用“they are popular”；“in big city”应改为“in big cities”；“Always have traffic jam”应改为“There are often traffic jams”；“you can through this place”应改为“you can get through the traffic quickly”或“you can travel around quickly”。最后的“don’t worry about...in workplace”意思不清，建议具体说明骑车可以帮助人们准时上班。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities where traffic congestion is a serious problem. They are convenient because people can get through busy streets more quickly and avoid being late for work. They are also cheaper and more environmentally friendly than cars.

× I had a bag when I were a child because I always rode my bike in the community with my friends after I finish my homework.

✓ I had a bag when I was a child because I always rode my bike in the community with my friends after I finished my homework.

这里描述的是童年时期的经历，应该使用一般过去时。主语是“I”时，be动词的过去式应为“was”，不能用“were”。另外，“after I finish”也应改为“after I finished”，与前面的过去时保持一致。

× I had a bag when I were a child because I always rode my bike in the community with my friends after I finish my homework.

✓ I had a bag when I was a child because I always rode my bike in the community with my friends after I finished my homework.

“finish”是一般现在时，而整个句子是在谈论过去的童年经历，所以应改为过去式“finished”。讲述过去发生的事情时，要注意主句和时间从句的时态保持一致。

× Yeah, yes, I think it's very popular because in big city the traffic is very busy.

✓ Yeah, yes, I think it's very popular because in big cities the traffic is very busy.

“big city”表示泛指多个大城市时，应使用复数形式“big cities”。如果只指一个城市，也可以说“in a big city”。

× Always have traffic jam.

✓ There are always traffic jams.

英语中表示“某处有某物”或“存在某种情况”时，需要使用“There be”句型。这里“traffic jams”是复数，所以应使用“There are”。

× Always have traffic jam.

✓ There are always traffic jams.

“traffic jam”是可数名词，表示经常出现的多个交通堵塞时，应使用复数形式“traffic jams”。同时，前面需要使用“There are”来构成完整句子。

× If you have a bike, you can, you can through this place very quickly and don't worry about, uh, in workplace.

✓ If you have a bike, you can go through this place very quickly and don't have to worry about traffic at work.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形，不能直接接“through”。因此应说“can go through”。另外，“don't have to worry”更适合表达“不必担心”，句子结构也更完整。