自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本直接，但时态和表达问题较多。应将“don't have”改为过去时“didn't have”，将“can't ride”改为“couldn't ride”。“rider bags”表达不清，可能想说“骑自行车”或“骑车摔倒”；“I've never started”是不完整句子，应删除或改成完整表达。建议使用“因为……，所以……”的清晰结构，并补充一个具体原因。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one. I was worried about falling off, so I never learned how to cycle.

建議: 回答观点明确，也提供了原因，但语法和搭配需要改进。“ride a bike to through the park”应改为“ride bikes through the park”，“they like bike to exercise your body”应改为“they ride bikes to exercise”。注意主语一致：谈论人们时使用“their bodies”，不要使用“your body”。可以补充一个具体场景，例如公园或城市短途出行，使内容更具体、更自然。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them through parks or use them for short journeys. Cycling is also a convenient way to exercise and avoid traffic.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I don't like rider bags and I can't ride a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't like riding bikes and I couldn't ride a bike.

“when I was a child”表示过去时间，因此主句和原因从句中的动词应使用过去时： “don't have”改为“didn't have”，“don't like”改为“didn't like”。

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I don't like rider bags and I can't ride a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't like riding bikes and I couldn't ride a bike.

因为句子描述的是童年时期的能力，所以情态动词“can”应使用过去式“could”，否定形式为“couldn't”。

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I don't like rider bags and I can't ride a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't like riding bikes and I couldn't ride a bike.

“like”后面表示喜欢某种活动时，通常接动名词（动词-ing形式），所以应说“like riding bikes”，而不是“like ride bikes”。

× I've never started

✓ I've never started riding a bike.

“I've never started”后缺少“开始做什么”的内容，句子意思不完整。可以在“started”后接动名词短语“riding a bike”，构成完整句子。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in a lot of places people like to ride a bike to through the park and they like bike to exercise your body.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because, in many places, people like to ride a bike through the park, and they like riding bikes to exercise their bodies.

“through the park”表示“穿过公园”，前面不需要介词“to”，所以“to through”应改为“through”。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in a lot of places people like to ride a bike to through the park and they like bike to exercise your body.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because, in many places, people like to ride a bike through the park, and they like riding bikes to exercise their bodies.

“like”后面表示喜欢骑自行车这一活动时，应使用动名词“riding”，所以“like bike”应改为“like riding bikes”。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in a lot of places people like to ride a bike to through the park and they like bike to exercise your body.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because, in many places, people like to ride a bike through the park, and they like riding bikes to exercise their bodies.

主语是“they”，表示“他们”，所以后面的物主代词应使用“their”，而不是“your”。同时，“people”是复数，因此“body”应改为“bodies”。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in a lot of places people like to ride a bike to through the park and they like bike to exercise your body.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because, in many places, people like to ride a bike through the park, and they like riding bikes to exercise their bodies.

“people”表示许多人，因此身体也应使用复数形式“bodies”，不能使用单数形式“body”。