自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答过去的经历时要使用过去时，因此应将“Yes, I do”改为“Yes, I did”。“brought back”在这里不自然，应该使用“bought for me”或“gave me”；“at one night”应改为“one night”。此外，避免重复“I don't I don't”，并将“two supporting wheels on the two sides”简化为更自然的“training wheels on both sides”。可以先直接回答，再补充自行车的具体特征或你当时的感受，使答案更流畅。

範例: Yes, I did. My uncle and father bought me my first bike one night when I was about five. I don’t remember its exact color, but I clearly remember that it had training wheels on both sides.

建議: 整体观点明确，也提供了过去、现在和近年来的例子，但需要改进时态、搭配和连接方式。“more and more popular”可以保留，但最好说明具体原因，例如环保、锻炼或交通便利。“When I was a kid we ride”应改为“When I was a kid, we rode”；“do bike”不自然，应改为“ride my bike”或“cycle”；“join the road bike cycling teams”可改为“take part in road-cycling groups”。减少“And”“umm”“uh”等口语填充词，并使用“Moreover”或“This is because”使逻辑更连贯。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming increasingly popular in China. When I was a child, many students rode bikes to school, and I still ride mine for exercise. Moreover, more people are joining road-cycling groups because cycling is both healthy and environmentally friendly.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题发生在过去，因此回答也要使用一般过去时。不能说 “I do”，应说 “I did”。回答过去时问题时，可以使用 “Yes, I did” 或 “No, I didn’t”。

× My first bike was brought back by my uncle and father at one night.

✓ My first bike was brought back by my uncle and father one night.

“one night”表示“某天晚上”，前面通常不使用介词 “at”。只有具体时间点才常用 “at”，例如 “at 8 p.m.”。

× When I was a kid we ride bikes to school and now I still do bike for my daily exercise.

✓ When I was a kid, we rode bikes to school, and now I still go biking for my daily exercise.

“When I was a kid”明确表示过去，所以动词 “ride” 应改为过去式 “rode”。描述过去发生的习惯时，要特别注意使用动词的过去式。

× When I was a kid we ride bikes to school and now I still do bike for my daily exercise.

✓ When I was a kid, we rode bikes to school, and now I still go biking for my daily exercise.

表达“去骑自行车”时，常用结构 “go biking”，而不是 “do bike”。“go + 动词-ing形式”可以表示参加某项活动，例如 “go swimming” 和 “go jogging”。

× And in recent years more and more people join the umm road bike cycling teams.

✓ And in recent years, more and more people have joined road-cycling teams.

“in recent years”表示从过去持续到现在的变化，通常使用现在完成时 “have joined”，而不是一般现在时 “join”。描述近年来发生的变化时，可以使用 “have/has + 过去分词”。