自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答“有还是没有”。建议先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”明确作答，再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的用途、购买时间或骑车地点。回答控制在2—3句话，并使用“because”或“when”连接信息。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it to school and around my neighborhood.

建議: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎，因为方便且有助于保持健康”的观点，但存在明显的语法和用词问题。应使用复数“bikes”或不可数概念“cycling”，改为“take people where they want to go”；“guys”不适合这里，应该说“people”；“keep fate”应改为“keep fit”。建议用“Yes, I think so”直接回答，再用“because”连接两个具体理由。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips. Besides, cycling helps people keep fit and avoid traffic jams.

× Yes, because bike can take people to the where they want Besides guys can keep fate

✓ Yes, because bikes can take people to where they want to go. Besides, guys can keep fit.

表示自行车这一类事物时，应使用复数形式“bikes”，而不是单数形式“bike”。“people”是复数名词，因此这里用“bikes”更自然。建议在表达一类事物时，通常使用复数名词。

× Yes, because bike can take people to the where they want Besides guys can keep fate

✓ Yes, because bikes can take people to where they want to go. Besides, guys can keep fit.

“where”引导地点从句时，前面不能加定冠词“the”，所以“the where”错误，应改为“where”。例如：“People can go where they want to go.”

× Yes, because bike can take people to the where they want Besides guys can keep fate

✓ Yes, because bikes can take people to where they want to go. Besides, guys can keep fit.

“where they want”后面缺少动词“to go”，完整表达应为“where they want to go”。此外，原句把两个意思连接在一起，缺少适当的标点；应分成两个句子，并在“Besides”后加逗号。建议一个句子表达一个完整意思，并检查从句中是否缺少谓语动词。