自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đi đúng trọng tâm và có thêm thông tin về mục đích sử dụng xe đạp. Tuy nhiên, cần tránh lặp từ “my parents”, sửa “have gave” thành “gave” vì đang kể về quá khứ, và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn thay cho “go around my hometown”. Bạn nên dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng gồm câu trả lời trực tiếp, lý do hoặc mục đích, rồi thêm một chi tiết cụ thể.

範例: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike when I was a child, so I usually cycled to school and around my hometown. It was a convenient and enjoyable way to get around.

建議: Bạn đã đưa ra quan điểm trực tiếp, nhưng phần giải thích còn khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi dùng từ và cấu trúc. Cần sửa “motorbike” thành “motorbikes”, “the personal car” thành “personal cars”, đồng thời loại bỏ các từ không phù hợp như “on Mars” và “buy”. Hãy dùng từ nối như “because” để giải thích rằng người dân thích phương tiện cơ giới hơn xe đạp, và đưa ra một lý do cụ thể như khoảng cách xa hoặc thời tiết nóng.

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes or private cars because they are faster and more convenient for travelling long distances. However, bicycles are still common among children and people who exercise.

× Yes, when I was a child I usually went to school by bike and my parents, my parents have gave me a bike to go to school and go around my hometown.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I usually went to school by bike, and my parents gave me a bike to go to school and get around my hometown.

The event of receiving the bike happened in the past, so use the simple past tense gave. The phrase have gave is incorrect because gave is the simple past form, not the past participle. Also, the repeated phrase my parents should be mentioned only once.

× Yes, when I was a child I usually went to school by bike and my parents, my parents have gave me a bike to go to school and go around my hometown.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I usually went to school by bike, and my parents gave me a bike to go to school and get around my hometown.

After have or has, the verb must be in its past participle form. The past participle of give is given, not gave. However, because this event was completed in the past, the more natural correction is to remove have and use the simple past form gave.

× No, I don't think so. From my point of view, the more people use motorbike or the personal car on Mars and they they don't use buy instead of this.

✓ No, I don't think so. From my point of view, most people use motorbikes or personal cars on Mars, and they do not use bikes instead.

The structure the more people use is incomplete because it normally requires a second comparative clause, such as the more..., the more.... Use the clearer subject most people instead. The repeated pronoun they they should be reduced to one they, and the sentence needs a complete coordinated structure with and.

× No, I don't think so. From my point of view, the more people use motorbike or the personal car on Mars and they they don't use buy instead of this.

✓ No, I don't think so. From my point of view, most people use motorbikes or personal cars on Mars, and they do not use bikes instead.

When talking about vehicles in general, use plural countable nouns: motorbikes, personal cars, and bikes. A singular countable noun usually needs a determiner, such as a, an, or the.

× No, I don't think so. From my point of view, the more people use motorbike or the personal car on Mars and they they don't use buy instead of this.

✓ No, I don't think so. From my point of view, most people use motorbikes or personal cars on Mars, and they do not use bikes instead.

The definite article the is used for a specific, previously identified car. Here, the speaker is referring to cars in general, so use the plural form personal cars without the article.