自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，也提供了学习骑车的经历和父亲陪伴这一细节，但句子过长且重复使用“like”。注意语法：用“spent two days learning how to cycle”，而不是“spent two days to learn how to cycling”；“my dad was”，而不是“my dad were”；“I felt”，而不是“I feel”；“ride a bike”前需要冠词。建议先直接回答，再用“because”或“so”连接原因和感受。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I spent about two days learning how to ride it, with my dad standing beside me. I felt safe because he encouraged me and helped me keep my balance.

建議: 回答表达了明确观点，但比较结构、词汇和句子结尾存在问题。应说“not as popular as”，而不是“not that popular than”；“transportation”通常不可数，且应说“trains”而不是“trained”；“bikes are not suitable”比“Hong Kong is not suitable for bike”更自然；“unsafe”是形容词，不是“unsafety”，并且最后一句缺少地点。建议补充具体原因，例如道路拥挤、山路多或自行车道有限，并使用“because”连接。

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are as popular as cars or trains in Hong Kong. The city is quite crowded, and many roads are narrow or steep. In addition, there are not enough dedicated bike lanes, so cycling can be unsafe in busy areas.

× Like when I was a child and I remember that I spent like 2 days to learn how to cycling and my dad were next to me so I feel very safe when I was learning how to ride bike.

✓ When I was a child, I remember that I spent about two days learning how to cycle, and my dad was next to me, so I felt very safe while I was learning how to ride a bike.

“Spend”后面应使用动名词形式，所以应说“spent two days learning”，不能说“spent two days to learn”。“How to”后面接动词原形，因此应说“how to cycle”，不能说“how to cycling”。因为是在回忆过去的经历，“were”应改为“was”，“feel”应改为过去式“felt”。“Ride a bike”中的可数名词“bike”前需要使用冠词“a”。

× Yeah, in Hong Kong, I don't think it's that popular than other transportations such as cars or trained because Hong Kong is not suitable for bike.

✓ Yeah, in Hong Kong, I don't think bikes are as popular as other forms of transportation, such as cars or trains, because Hong Kong is not suitable for bikes.

比较两者是否同样受欢迎时，应使用“as popular as”，不能使用“popular than”。这里谈论的是一般的自行车，所以主语应为复数“bikes”，谓语也应使用“are”，而不是“it's”。“Train”作为交通工具名称应使用复数“trains”。“Bike”表示一般类别时也应使用复数“bikes”。

× It will be unsafety if you ride a bike in the.

✓ It will be unsafe if you ride a bike there.

“Unsafety”是名词，句中需要形容词来描述环境是否安全，因此应使用“unsafe”。“In the”后面缺少名词，句子不完整；这里可以使用地点副词“there”来代替前面提到的地方。