自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, but avoid repetition such as “growing up as a child,” “bike/bicycle,” and “I really loved it/I really liked my bike.” Use a more natural opening and connect the details smoothly. Your answer includes relevant and specific information, especially your father teaching you and the bicycle being pink. However, it contains six sentences if the final short sentence is counted separately, so keep the response within five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a pink bicycle when I was a child. My dad, who was a keen cyclist, taught me how to ride it. I loved having a bike because most of my friends had one too, so we often rode around our neighborhood together.

建議: State your opinion clearly at the beginning and avoid repeating that bicycles are expensive and uncommon. The phrase “back in Africa” is unnecessary, and “little tractor toys, which could also symbolize a bicycle” is unclear and does not logically support your answer. Give one or two specific reasons, such as the cost of bicycles and limited cycling infrastructure, and use a linking word such as “because” or “as a result.”

範例: No, bicycles are not particularly popular in Zimbabwe. They can be quite expensive, and many families cannot afford to buy one. In addition, some areas do not have safe cycling lanes, so people often prefer to use public transport or walk.