自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ начинается прямо и по теме, но он обрывается и содержит много повторов: “beautiful places” и “beautiful scenery”. Выражение “joint memories” использовано неправильно; лучше сказать “wonderful memories” или “happy memories”. Также нужно использовать прошедшее время последовательно: “I loved riding it”. Сформулируйте ответ в 2–4 предложениях и добавьте конкретную деталь, например, куда вы ездили и с кем.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I loved riding it. I often cycled to the seaside or to scenic places in my town with my friends. Those trips gave me many happy memories.

建議: Основная идея понятна, но грамматика и формулировки требуют исправления: вместо “I think it’s not” скажите “I don’t think they are”. Не следует одновременно использовать “I live” и “I am living”; здесь естественно “I live”. Слово “approach” не подходит по смыслу — используйте “bike lanes”, “cycling paths” или “cycling infrastructure”. Добавьте логичную связку и конкретное объяснение, например, что отсутствие велодорожек делает езду небезопасной.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. The main reason is that we lack proper cycling infrastructure, such as bike lanes and safe parking areas. As a result, many people prefer to use cars or public transport.

× Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child and I love riding it.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I loved riding it.

Because the question refers to the student's childhood, the past tense loved is more consistent than the present tense love. Use the past tense when describing feelings or habits that belonged to a finished period in the past.

× It gave me a lot of joint memories because I liked to go to some beautiful places like Ocean and some beautiful scenery in my town and a lot of time I spent with my

✓ It gave me many happy memories because I liked going to beautiful places, such as the ocean, and I spent a lot of time with my family.

The original sentence is incomplete because with my has no noun after it. The ideas are also connected in an unclear order. A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb in each main clause, and the phrase spent a lot of time should be placed before its object.

× I think it's not because I live I am living at some small town and we don't have some appropriate approach approach and suitable infrastructure.

✓ I do not think bikes are popular because I live in a small town, and we do not have suitable roads or infrastructure.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to the plural noun bikes. Use the plural pronoun they, or repeat the noun bikes. The correction avoids this problem by repeating bikes in the first clause.

× I think it's not because I live I am living at some small town and we don't have some appropriate approach approach and suitable infrastructure.

✓ I do not think bikes are popular because I live in a small town, and we do not have suitable roads or infrastructure.

Use the preposition in with towns and cities: I live in a small town. The preposition at is not appropriate in this context.

× I think it's not because I live I am living at some small town and we don't have some appropriate approach approach and suitable infrastructure.

✓ I do not think bikes are popular because I live in a small town, and we do not have suitable roads or infrastructure.

In a negative sentence, some is normally replaced by any, but in this sentence the most natural correction is to omit the quantifier altogether. Also, a small town is needed because town is a singular countable noun.

× I think it's not because I live I am living at some small town and we don't have some appropriate approach approach and suitable infrastructure.

✓ I do not think bikes are popular because I live in a small town, and we do not have suitable roads or infrastructure.

The phrase I live I am living contains two competing verb phrases. Use only one: I live in a small town. The repeated word approach approach should also be removed, and the sentence should be organized into clear clauses.