自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答内容直接，也提供了购买时间和原因，但有明显的词汇和语法错误。应将“buy”改为“bike”，因为“buy”是动词“购买”；描述过去经历时要统一使用过去时，如“had”“gave”。同时，需要使用连接词或标点分开信息，使句子更自然。

範例: Yes, I had my own bike when I was five. My parents gave it to me as a birthday present, so I was really excited to ride it around my neighborhood.

建議: 回答包含个人经历，但没有清晰、直接地回答自行车在本国是否流行。开头的“buys”及后面的“buy”都应改为“bikes”；“when I studied”应使用过去时；“my parents very trusted it”表达不自然，可改为“my parents trusted me to ride it”或“they felt it was safe”。建议先明确表态，再用个人经历说明原因，并使用“because”“for example”等连接词。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. For example, when I was in primary and junior school, I often rode my bike to school because it was convenient and my parents thought it was safe.

× Of course I have my own buy when I was 5 on my 5th birthday my parents give me a buy as a gift.

✓ Of course, I had my own bike when I was five. On my fifth birthday, my parents gave me a bike as a gift.

题目询问的是童年时期的经历，因此应该使用过去时。have 应改为 had，give 应改为 gave。这里的 buy 应为 bike；这属于单词拼写或用词问题，不属于指定的语法问题类型。

× Of course I have my own buy when I was 5 on my 5th birthday my parents give me a buy as a gift.

✓ Of course, I had my own bike when I was five. On my fifth birthday, my parents gave me a bike as a gift.

原句把多个完整意思连续放在一起，缺少句号和适当的标点，形成句子连接不当的问题。可以把它拆成两个完整句子，使表达更清楚。

× I'm not sure buys are very popular in my country, but As for me, buy is very convenient and when I study in primary school and Junior School, my parents always let me ride my bike to go to school and my parents very trusted it.

✓ I'm not sure bikes are very popular in my country, but as for me, bikes are very convenient. When I studied in primary school and junior school, my parents always let me ride my bike to school, and they really trusted me.

句子描述的是学生过去上小学和初中的经历，所以 when I study 应改为 when I studied。注意，描述过去的习惯时，always 后面仍然可以使用过去式，例如 always let。

× I'm not sure buys are very popular in my country, but As for me, buy is very convenient and when I study in primary school and Junior School, my parents always let me ride my bike to go to school and my parents very trusted it.

✓ I'm not sure bikes are very popular in my country, but as for me, bikes are very convenient. When I studied in primary school and junior school, my parents always let me ride my bike to school, and they really trusted me.

这里是在泛指自行车，因此使用复数 bikes 更自然，并与后面的 are 保持一致。单数 bike 也可以表示一辆自行车，但不能写成 buy；buy 是“购买”的意思。

× I'm not sure buys are very popular in my country, but As for me, buy is very convenient and when I study in primary school and Junior School, my parents always let me ride my bike to go to school and my parents very trusted it.

✓ I'm not sure bikes are very popular in my country, but as for me, bikes are very convenient. When I studied in primary school and junior school, my parents always let me ride my bike to school, and they really trusted me.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 trusted。修饰动词时应使用 really、strongly 等副词，例如 my parents really trusted me。副词 really 放在动词 trusted 前面更自然。

× I'm not sure buys are very popular in my country, but As for me, buy is very convenient and when I study in primary school and Junior School, my parents always let me ride my bike to go to school and my parents very trusted it.

✓ I'm not sure bikes are very popular in my country, but as for me, bikes are very convenient. When I studied in primary school and junior school, my parents always let me ride my bike to school, and they really trusted me.

根据上下文，父母信任的是“我”，而不是自行车，所以 it 应改为 me。表达“父母信任我骑自行车上学”时，可以说 my parents trusted me。