自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答方向正确，也给出了重庆地形作为原因，但句子结构不完整且存在明显语法问题。可以先直接回答“No, I didn’t”，然后用“because”说明原因；“my hometown in Chongqing”应改为“my hometown, Chongqing”或“Chongqing, my hometown”，“it is the mountain city”应改为“it is a mountainous city”。最后一句“If you ride a bike”没有完成，应补充结果，例如“it can be quite difficult and dangerous”。建议控制在2—3个完整句子内。

範例: No, I didn’t. I grew up in Chongqing, which is a very mountainous city, so riding a bike was quite difficult. Most people preferred taking buses or using other forms of transport.

建議: 回答包含总体观点和地区对比，内容方向较好，但有多处词汇和语法错误。“backs”应为“bikes”，“Rite”应为“ride”；“in our city is not very popular”应改为“they are not very popular in my city”。此外，“Maybe we don’t like ride”表达不自然，应改为“Maybe people don’t like riding bikes”。可以使用“however”或“because”连接观点，并具体说明山区骑车困难这一原因。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in the northern cities, where the roads are generally flatter. However, they are less common in my city, Chongqing, because the mountainous terrain makes cycling more difficult. People there usually prefer taking public transport.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my hometown in Chongqing in the southwest of China it is the mountain city.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my hometown, Chongqing, in southwestern China, is a mountainous city.

原句中“my hometown ... it is”重复使用了主语，造成句子结构错误。应删除“it”，并用逗号将“Chongqing”和地点信息隔开。另外，“the mountain city”表达不自然；这里应使用“a mountainous city”，表示“一个多山的城市”。

× If you ride a bike

✓ If you ride a bike there, it is difficult.

原句是一个以“If”开头的条件从句，但没有主句，因此句子不完整。需要补充主句“it is difficult”，完整表达“在那里骑自行车很困难”。

× Yes, backs are very popular in my country, especially in the north, but in our city is not very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the north, but they are not very popular in our city.

“backs”应为“bikes”。因为谈论的是自行车这一类事物，所以使用复数“bikes”。后半句缺少主语，应使用代词“they”指代“bikes”，并搭配复数动词“are”。

× Yes, backs are very popular in my country, especially in the north, but in our city is not very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the north, but they are not very popular in our city.

后半句的主语是复数“bikes”，不能直接使用“is”。应使用复数代词“they”和复数形式“are”。英语中每个完整分句都需要明确的主语和与主语一致的谓语。

× Maybe we don't like Rite because of the mountains.

✓ Maybe we don't like riding because of the mountains.

“like”后面表示喜欢或不喜欢某项活动时，通常接动名词，即“like doing something”。因此“like ride”应改为“like riding”。“Rite”不是正确的动词形式，应改为“riding”。