自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，也提供了购买者和骑车伙伴等细节，但时态和搭配错误影响自然度。因为问题询问过去经历，应将“have”改为“had”，“brought it for me”应改为“bought it for me”，“ride”应改为过去式“rode”；“in summer holiday”应改为“during the summer holidays”。建议先直接回答，再用“when”和“so”连接细节，使答案更连贯。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was about eight. I often rode it with my friends during the summer holidays, so it was one of my favorite ways to spend my free time.

建議: 回答表达了明确观点，并举出了家庭骑车和沿海骑行的例子，但“I think”重复，且“the bike”应改为泛指复数“bikes”。“see people ride bikes”可以使用，但“on the streets”更自然；“enjoy the free time”应改为“enjoy their free time”。建议删除重复表达，并使用“for example”和“because”清楚连接观点与具体细节。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see families riding bicycles on the streets or along the coastline. Many people enjoy cycling because it is a healthy and relaxing way to spend their free time.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题是在回答关于童年经历的过去时问题时，使用了现在时“have”。因为“when you were a child”表示过去，所以应使用过去时“had”。

× I often ride my bike with my friends in summer holiday.

✓ I often rode my bike with my friends during the summer holidays.

“When I was a child”描述的是过去的习惯，因此“ride”应改为过去式“rode”。建议看到“when I was...”或其他过去时间表达时，保持句子中的动词使用过去时。

× I often ride my bike with my friends in summer holiday.

✓ I often rode my bike with my friends during the summer holidays.

表达“在暑假期间”时，通常使用介词“during”，而不是“in”。“during the summer holidays”是更自然、正确的表达。

× Well, I think my I think the bike is very popular in our country.

✓ Well, I think bikes are very popular in our country.

原句中“I think”重复出现，而且“my I think”不能构成正确的句子结构。应删除重复部分，并使用“bikes”表示自行车这一类事物。