自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ соответствует вопросу, но он перегружен словами-паразитами ("uh") и содержит повтор: "when I was a child". Используйте простую структуру: прямой ответ, затем 1–2 конкретные детали. Исправьте порядок слов и артикли: "It was grey and had some stickers on it" вместо "it was Gray, with some stamps". Слово "stickers" здесь естественнее, чем "stamps", если имеются в виду наклейки.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was grey and had some colorful stickers on it. I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Основная мысль понятна, но есть несколько грамматических и лексических ошибок. Вместо "in the last time" используйте "recently" или "lately"; вместо "people more choose bikes" — "more people are choosing bikes"; вместо "like a transport" — "as a means of transport". Начните с чёткого ответа и добавьте причину или пример, используя связку "however" или "because".

範例: Bikes are not very popular in my country, although this is beginning to change. Recently, more people have started choosing bicycles as a means of transport because they are affordable and environmentally friendly.

× Or when I was a child, uh, I had a bike, uh, it was, uh, Gray, uh, with, uh, some, uh, stamps.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a gray bike with some stamps on it.

The original answer contains a sentence fragment beginning with 'Or' and a comma splice connecting several independent clauses. Use 'Yes' to answer the question directly and combine the ideas into one grammatically complete sentence. 'Gray' should also be lowercase because it is an adjective, not a proper noun.

× I think bikes are not popular in my country but in the last time I noticed that people more choose bikes like a transport.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country, but recently I have noticed that more people choose bikes as a means of transport.

The expressions 'in the last time' and 'like a transport' use incorrect prepositions. Use 'recently' or 'lately' instead of 'in the last time', and use 'as a means of transport' to describe the function of bikes. The phrase 'more people choose' is also the natural word order; 'people more choose' is incorrect.

× I think bikes are not popular in my country but in the last time I noticed that people more choose bikes like a transport.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country, but recently I have noticed that more people choose bikes as a means of transport.

The adverb 'more' is incorrectly placed before the verb in 'people more choose'. When 'more' modifies the noun phrase, it should come before the noun: 'more people choose'. This means that an increasing number of people choose bikes.