自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in the past tense because you are talking about childhood. Correct “have” to “had,” “spike” to “bike,” and “I were” to “I was.” Avoid repeating “it was,” and add one specific detail about why you loved the bike. A clear topic sentence followed by a reason would make the answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me for my second birthday, so it was very special to me. I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Give a complete answer and avoid hesitation and repetition. Correct “pico” to “bike,” add “a” before “popular form,” and use the present simple “people use” for a regular habit. Use a linking word such as “because” to introduce a specific reason, and finish the list of places or activities.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. They also help people avoid heavy traffic and reduce pollution.

× Yes, I have a small spike.

✓ Yes, I had a small bike.

The question asks about a past experience in childhood, so use the past-tense form had instead of the present-tense form have. Also, bike is the appropriate word in this context.

× When I were two years old it was it was a gift from my father on my birthday.

✓ When I was two years old, it was a gift from my father on my birthday.

Use was with the subject I in the past tense. The repeated words it was it was should be removed. A comma after the introductory when-clause also makes the sentence clearer.

× Yes, uh, pico is uh, really, uh, popular form of transportation in my country

✓ Yes, bikes are a really popular form of transportation in my country.

The singular countable noun form needs the indefinite article a because the sentence refers to one type or category of transportation. Bikes is also the appropriate plural subject for the question about bikes in general.

× people, uh, people are using it every day to go to work, to school and.

✓ People use them every day to go to work and school.

Use the present simple use for a regular or habitual activity. The present progressive are using is less natural here because the sentence describes what people generally do. The repeated subject people should be stated only once, bikes should be referred to with the plural pronoun them, and the unfinished phrase at the end should be removed.

× people, uh, people are using it every day to go to work, to school and.

✓ People use them every day to go to work and school.

The original sentence contains a repeated subject and ends with an incomplete phrase after and. A complete sentence should contain a clear subject and verb and should not end with an unfinished conjunction.