自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Begin with a clear direct answer and use the correct past tense: “when I was a child.” Avoid repeating words such as “and” and express the activity naturally as “go cycling.” You should also use a linking word such as “Whenever” or “We often” to connect the supporting detail smoothly. Use “the bicycle path” rather than “I think bicycle path.”

範例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike when I was a child, and we often went cycling together on the nearby bicycle path. It was a great way to spend time with him.

建議: Use the complete structure “I think bikes are quite popular.” Avoid repeating “cycling” and “for.” The phrase “bike-sharing schemes” is more natural than “sharing cycling cycle,” and you should explain specifically how people use them. A clear reason and a concrete result would make your answer more effective.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. This is partly because bike-sharing schemes are widely available, so people can easily rent a bicycle for short journeys. They are convenient and also help reduce traffic congestion.

× Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I were a child and and we will go to the I think bicycle path to cycling together.

✓ Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I was a child, and I think we went to the bicycle path to cycle together.

The sentence refers to a childhood experience in the past, so were should be was after the singular subject I, and will go should be went. The past tense should be used consistently when describing past events.

× Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I were a child and and we will go to the I think bicycle path to cycling together.

✓ Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I was a child, and I think we went to the bicycle path to cycle together.

The conjunction and is repeated unnecessarily. Use and only once to connect the two parts of the sentence.

× Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I were a child and and we will go to the I think bicycle path to cycling together.

✓ Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I was a child, and I think we went to the bicycle path to cycle together.

After the infinitive marker to, use the base form of the verb, cycle, not the -ing form, cycling. The correct structure is to cycle together.

× Yes, I think quite a popular in my country because nowadays there is some sharing cycling cycle for cycling for the people who can use the for the public.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays there are bike-sharing services available to the public.

The clause I think quite a popular is missing a verb. Because bikes is the subject, add are: I think bikes are quite popular.

× Yes, I think quite a popular in my country because nowadays there is some sharing cycling cycle for cycling for the people who can use the for the public.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays there are bike-sharing services available to the public.

Do not use a before the adjective popular in this structure. The correct pattern is subject + be + adjective: bikes are popular.

× Yes, I think quite a popular in my country because nowadays there is some sharing cycling cycle for cycling for the people who can use the for the public.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays there are bike-sharing services available to the public.

The noun services is plural, so use there are instead of there is. Use there is with a singular or uncountable noun and there are with a plural noun.

× Yes, I think quite a popular in my country because nowadays there is some sharing cycling cycle for cycling for the people who can use the for the public.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays there are bike-sharing services available to the public.

The original phrase uses an unclear singular form, cycling cycle. The natural plural noun phrase is bike-sharing services because it refers to services that provide multiple shared bicycles.

× Yes, I think quite a popular in my country because nowadays there is some sharing cycling cycle for cycling for the people who can use the for the public.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays there are bike-sharing services available to the public.

The phrase available to the public is the natural prepositional expression here. The original sequence for the people who can use the for the public contains unnecessary and incorrectly organized prepositions.