自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“是”或“不是”，并使用正确的过去时。这里应将现在时“have”改为过去时“had”，并用“when I was a child”表达“小时候”。同时避免重复“bike/bicycle”和“have”，可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或用途。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed riding it.

建議: 回答的主要观点是清楚的，但需要使用更自然、准确的词组。可以说“public transportation system is highly developed/convenient”，而不是“transportation system is quite full”；“roads are often crowded with buses and cars”比“the road is not full of the bus car”更自然。此外，应明确说明香港道路空间有限，因此人们通常不把骑自行车作为休闲活动，并避免重复“for”。

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Hong Kong. The public transportation system is highly developed, and the roads are often crowded with buses and cars. In addition, there isn’t much space for people to cycle safely, so most residents use bikes mainly for exercise rather than transportation.

× Yes, I have a buy one.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题使用了现在时“have”，但考官的问题是“Did you have...?”，询问过去的经历，因此应使用过去时“had”。同时，“buy”不能这样作名词使用，应该直接说“a bike”。

× I have child.

✓ I was a child.

这里是在描述过去“小时候”的情况，应使用过去时“was”，而不是“have”。表达“我是一个孩子”应使用“I was a child”。

× I have child.

✓ I was a child.

可数名词单数“child”前面需要冠词。这里应使用不定冠词“a”，即“a child”。

× I also like to have bicycle.

✓ I also liked having a bicycle.

因为问题询问的是童年时期的情况，所以“like”应改为过去式“liked”。

× I also like to have bicycle.

✓ I also liked having a bicycle.

“bicycle”是可数名词单数，前面必须加冠词。这里应说“a bicycle”。

× Because in Hong Kong transportation system is quite full.

✓ Because in Hong Kong, the transportation system is quite full.

特指香港的交通系统时，应在“transportation system”前使用定冠词“the”。

× The transportation system is quite full.

✓ The transportation system is quite crowded.

“full”通常表示“装满的”，描述交通系统拥挤时使用“crowded”更准确。应说“the transportation system is quite crowded”。

× The road is not full of the bus car.

✓ The roads are full of buses and cars.

这里是在泛指香港的多条道路，因此“road”应使用复数“roads”。“bus”和“car”也是多个交通工具，应分别使用复数“buses”和“cars”。

× The road is not full of the bus car.

✓ The roads are full of buses and cars.

泛指公交车和汽车时，不需要在复数名词前使用“the”。因此应说“buses and cars”，而不是“the bus car”。

× They've not known in enough space.

✓ There isn't enough space.

表达“没有足够的空间”时，应使用“There be”句型，即“There isn't enough space”。“They've not known”不能表达这个意思。

× They've not known in enough space to let people to ride bar for for fun.

✓ There isn't enough space for people to ride bikes for fun.

原句的主语、谓语和结构混乱。“There isn't enough space”表示“没有足够的空间”；在“let”之后应使用不带“to”的动词原形，但这里可以直接改成“space for people to ride bikes”，结构更清楚。

× For for fun.

✓ For fun.

“for”被重复使用了一次。固定表达是“for fun”，意思是“为了娱乐”。