自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp và có một vài chi tiết cá nhân, nhưng nhiều lỗi khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Cần sửa thì và cấu trúc: dùng “When I was three, my mother bought me a pink bike for my birthday” thay cho “When I wore dry...”; dùng “I was two years old” thay cho “I were two years”; và dùng quá khứ nhất quán như “loved”, “decorated” và “took”. Tránh lặp từ “pink pink” và diễn đạt rõ ý “decorate it with flowers”. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp bằng câu trả lời “Yes, I did”, sau đó thêm lý do và một vài chi tiết theo trình tự logic.

範例: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a pink bike for my birthday when I was three years old. I loved it and decorated it with lots of flowers. I often rode it to school.

建議: Bạn đã nêu được ý rằng xe đạp phổ biến vì thân thiện với môi trường và phục vụ việc tập thể dục, nhưng câu trả lời chưa có cấu trúc rõ ràng và nhiều cụm từ không tự nhiên. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes, they are quite popular in Vietnam”, dùng “bikes are environmentally friendly” thay cho “Vietnam's were eco friendly with the environment”, và dùng các động từ chính xác như “ride bikes to school” hoặc “use them for exercise”. Cần chia ý bằng từ nối như “because” và “also”, đồng thời tránh lặp lại hoặc ghép quá nhiều ý trong một câu. Có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về học sinh hoặc người dân đi xe đạp để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people who want to exercise. They are environmentally friendly and inexpensive to use. Many people ride them to school, to work, or simply to relax at the weekend.

× When I wore dry I have a pink pink my mother pulled for me for my birthday.

✓ When I was three, I had a pink bike that my mother bought for me for my birthday.

The answer describes a childhood experience, so the past tense is required. Use was instead of wore and had instead of have. The past form bought is also needed because the buying happened in the past. The phrase a pink bike is complete and natural.

× So when I were two years I really loved it and I repair some flowers some lots of flowers to decorate on it.

✓ When I was two years old, I really loved it, and I decorated it with lots of flowers.

Use was with the subject I, and use the past-tense verb decorated because this event happened in the past. The expression when I was two years old is the correct way to describe a person's age.

× So when I were two years I really loved it and I repair some flowers some lots of flowers to decorate on it.

✓ When I was two years old, I really loved it, and I decorated it with lots of flowers.

The phrase some lots of flowers is incorrect because some and lots of should not be combined in this way. Use lots of flowers to express a large quantity.

× So when I were two years I really loved it and I repair some flowers some lots of flowers to decorate on it.

✓ When I was two years old, I really loved it, and I decorated it with lots of flowers.

We say decorate something with flowers, not decorate flowers on something. The preposition with correctly introduces the material used for decoration.

× I also take it to go to school.

✓ I also took it to school.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. The past form of take is took. The phrase to go is unnecessary because took it to school already expresses the meaning.

× Actually Vietnam's were eco friendly with the environment and we always protect the environment by right by to go to school and they often buy for exercise for work in some time for relaxed so attend our popular in my country.

✓ Actually, Vietnamese people are environmentally friendly, and they always protect the environment by riding bikes to school. They often ride bikes for exercise, to go to work, and sometimes to relax, so bikes are popular in my country.

This answer expresses general facts about the present, so use the present-tense forms are, protect, ride, and are. The subject Vietnamese people is clearer than Vietnam's, which is a possessive form and cannot function correctly as the subject here.

× Actually Vietnam's were eco friendly with the environment and we always protect the environment by right by to go to school and they often buy for exercise for work in some time for relaxed so attend our popular in my country.

✓ Actually, Vietnamese people are environmentally friendly, and they always protect the environment by riding bikes to school. They often ride bikes for exercise, to go to work, and sometimes to relax, so bikes are popular in my country.

After the preposition by, use a gerund ending in -ing. Therefore, by riding bikes is correct, not by ride or by to go. After for, use to relax when giving the purpose of an activity.

× Actually Vietnam's were eco friendly with the environment and we always protect the environment by right by to go to school and they often buy for exercise for work in some time for relaxed so attend our popular in my country.

✓ Actually, Vietnamese people are environmentally friendly, and they always protect the environment by riding bikes to school. They often ride bikes for exercise, to go to work, and sometimes to relax, so bikes are popular in my country.

Use by riding bikes to school to describe the method of transportation. Use for exercise and to go to work to express purpose. The prepositions for and to must match the intended meaning.

× Actually Vietnam's were eco friendly with the environment and we always protect the environment by right by to go to school and they often buy for exercise for work in some time for relaxed so attend our popular in my country.

✓ Actually, Vietnamese people are environmentally friendly, and they always protect the environment by riding bikes to school. They often ride bikes for exercise, to go to work, and sometimes to relax, so bikes are popular in my country.

The original answer joins many incomplete and incorrectly ordered phrases, making the sentence difficult to understand. Divide the ideas into clear sentences and use a subject, verb, and complete purpose phrase in each sentence.

× Actually Vietnam's were eco friendly with the environment and we always protect the environment by right by to go to school and they often buy for exercise for work in some time for relaxed so attend our popular in my country.

✓ Actually, Vietnamese people are environmentally friendly, and they always protect the environment by riding bikes to school. They often ride bikes for exercise, to go to work, and sometimes to relax, so bikes are popular in my country.

The plural subject Vietnamese people takes the plural verb are. The plural subject bikes also takes are, not is. Subject and verb must agree in number.