自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且有具体细节，内容比较丰富，但存在一些语法和表达问题。首先，应说“Both of them were bought by my mother”，因为是在描述过去的事情；“the first one was pink and bigger”比“was a pink one and it's a bigger one”更自然。其次，“wanted me to use”中必须有“to”。可以使用“firstly”和“then”等连接词，让信息顺序更清晰。最后，可以补充说明为什么有两辆自行车或练习后的结果，但不要堆砌重复信息。

範例: Yes, I had two bikes when I was a child, and both of them were bought by my mother. The first one was pink and quite large, while the second was blue and smaller. My mother wanted me to use the blue one for practice because it was easier to control. After a few weeks, I became much more confident riding it.

建議: 回答了问题，也提供了个人经历作为支持，但开头“Yes, I think”不完整，应改为“Yes, definitely”或“Yes, I think they are”。描述过去经历时，动词时态要保持一致，应使用“rode”而不是“ride”。“the other places”表达不自然，可以说“other places nearby”。为了让答案更完整，可以先说明自行车在本国受欢迎的原因，再提供学生时代的例子，并使用“for example”或“also”连接观点。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient, especially for students. For example, when I was at school, about half of my classmates owned a bike, and we often rode to the park or other places nearby. They were a simple and enjoyable way to get around.

× Two of them are bought from my mother.

✓ Two of them were bought from my mother.

这里描述的是童年时发生的事情，应该使用一般过去时。被动语态中的 are 要改为过去式 were。

× The first one was a pink one and it's a bigger one.

✓ The first one was a pink one, and it was a bigger one.

前文是在讲过去的自行车，因此后面的现在时 is 要改为过去时 was。描述过去的事情时，要保持时态一致。

× The second one is a blue one.

✓ The second one was a blue one.

这句话继续描述学生小时候的自行车，所以应该使用一般过去时。is 要改为 was。

× My mother wanted me use the blue one to practice my skills.

✓ My mother wanted me to use the blue one to practice my skills.

want 后面接“人+to do”结构，不能直接接动词原形。正确结构是 wanted + me + to use。

× We always ride bikes to the park and the other places.

✓ We always rode bikes to the park and the other places.

When I was a student 表示过去的时间背景，因此后面的动作也应该用一般过去时。ride 的过去式是 rode。

× We always ride bikes to the park and the other places.

✓ We always rode bikes to the park and other places.

other places 表示其他一些地方，通常是泛指，不需要在 other 前使用定冠词 the。the other places 通常指前面已经明确提到的其他地方。