自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and well developed, with several specific examples of how you used your bikes. However, you repeat “bike/bikes” and “used to ride bikes” several times, which makes the response less natural. The phrase “they would get them every year” is slightly unclear; say “they bought me a new one almost every year” if that is what you mean. You could also use a linking expression such as “For example” before giving details, and replace “go see my friends in the other streets” with the more natural phrase “visit friends who lived nearby.”

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about six, and they replaced it with a new one every few years as I grew taller. I really enjoyed riding it to school and around my neighborhood. For example, I often cycled to visit friends who lived nearby or played in the park with them.

建議: You answer the question directly, but the response is too short and the final phrase contains a vocabulary and grammar error. “Transport” is usually uncountable, so say “for transportation” or “as a means of transport,” and “modern transports” is not natural in this context. Add one or two specific reasons or examples, such as using bikes for commuting, exercise, or avoiding traffic. Link the ideas with expressions like “especially” or “in addition.”

範例: Yes, I’d say bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them for transportation because they are affordable and help them avoid traffic jams. In addition, cycling has become popular as a form of exercise, particularly among young people.

× Many people use them for modern transports.

✓ Many people use them for modern transportation.

Transportation is an uncountable noun when referring to the general activity or system of moving people and goods, so it is not normally used in the plural form transports in this context. Use modern transportation or modern transport instead.