自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，但时态、冠词和句子结构错误较多。应使用一般过去时回答童年经历，例如用 “I didn’t have a bike” 而不是 “I haven’t”。同时应说 “ride a bike” 而不是 “take a bike”，并使用 “a bike” 或 “one” 而不是 “bike”。建议先直接回答，再补充现在偶尔骑丈夫的自行车，并用 because 或 although 连接细节，使表达更自然、连贯。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I sometimes rode my husband’s bike when I was older, but I never owned one myself.

建議: 回答直接，但语法和表达不够自然。应将 “A bike in our country is very popular” 改为 “Bikes are very popular in my country”，并将 “everyone have” 改为 “everyone has”。“Everyone”过于绝对，除非确实如此，否则可以说 “many people” 或 “most people”。建议补充一个具体原因，例如自行车价格便宜、方便通勤或有助于锻炼，并使用 because 连接原因。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. They are also a good way to exercise and avoid traffic.

× No, I haven't, umm, when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

问题发生在过去（when I was a child），所以应该使用一般过去时。回答“有没有自行车”时，要用助动词did加动词原形have，不能用现在完成时haven't。

× I want to take a bike, uh, sometime use my husband's bike.

✓ I wanted to ride a bike, and I sometimes used my husband's bike.

原句中的多个动词没有用正确的结构连接，导致句子不完整、不连贯。因为是在讲童年经历，want和use都应使用过去时wanted和used。表示“骑自行车”通常使用ride a bike，而不是take a bike。

× I haven't bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

这里继续描述童年时的情况，因此要使用一般过去时。否定句结构是didn't + 动词原形have。

× I haven't bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

可数名词单数bike前面通常需要冠词。这里表示“一辆自行车”，所以要使用不定冠词a。

× A bike in our country is very popular.

✓ Bikes are very popular in our country.

这里是在泛指一个国家的人普遍喜欢自行车，应该使用复数形式Bikes，而不是单数形式A bike。复数主语Bikes要搭配are。

× And everyone have a bike.

✓ And everyone has a bike.

Everyone虽然表示“每个人”，但语法上属于第三人称单数，所以一般现在时中动词have要变为has。