自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Begin with a clear topic sentence such as “Yes, I did,” and then add one specific detail. The phrases “became to,” “write back,” and “when I was kindergarten” are incorrect or unclear; use “learned to ride a bike” and “when I was in kindergarten.”

範例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was in kindergarten. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: Give a more natural answer by saying “Yes, I do” or “Yes, definitely,” and support your opinion with a specific reason or result. The answer is relevant, but it would be stronger with a linking word such as “because” and an additional detail about convenience, cost, or traffic. Also, end the sentence with a period.

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among high school students, because they are affordable and convenient for getting to school. They also help students avoid heavy traffic.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about a past situation, using did: Did you have a bike when you were a child? Therefore, the answer should also use the past-tense auxiliary did, not the present-tense do.

× I remember I became to I would write back when I was kindergarten.

✓ I remember that I began to ride a bike when I was in kindergarten.

The original sentence has an incorrect and incomplete structure: became to I would write back. To express the memory clearly, use remember that followed by a complete clause. The phrase in kindergarten is also the natural expression for describing a time when a child attended kindergarten.