自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本直接，但时态和表达不够自然。“I don't have”应改为过去时“I didn't have”，“hold a bicycle and stand on it”表达生硬，可以说“ride a bike”或“balance on a bike”。此外，“scared”重复了两次，第二句也重复了第一句的信息。建议用“直接回答+原因+结果”的结构，并加入一个具体细节，例如小时候没有人教你骑车，或你曾经害怕摔倒。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of falling off. I never learned how to ride one, although I’d like to learn someday.

建議: 回答表达了观点和原因，但句子结构有明显语法问题。“they have a policy ... is that”应改为“the government encourages people to...”，并且“riding bicycle”应为“riding bicycles”或“cycling”。“in my country”重复出现，影响自然度。建议先明确回答“是/不是”，再说明环保和交通便利等原因，并补充一个具体例子，例如城市设有自行车道或共享单车很常见。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. The government encourages people to cycle because it is environmentally friendly and helps reduce traffic congestion. In many cities, bike-sharing services and dedicated cycle lanes make cycling more convenient.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child because I was scared to hold a bicycle and stand on it, so I am very scared of it.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was scared to hold a bicycle and stand on it, so I was very scared of it.

句子讲述的是童年时期的经历，因此相关动词应使用一般过去时。将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”，将 “am” 改为 “was”。描述过去的经历时，要注意整句话的时态保持一致。

× So I don't know how to ride a bicycle.

✓ So I didn't know how to ride a bicycle.

根据上下文，学生描述的是童年时不会骑自行车，因此应使用一般过去时 “didn't know”，而不是现在时 “don't know”。如果想表达现在仍然不会骑，也可以说 “So I still don't know how to ride a bicycle.”

× I think bikes are popular in my country because they have a policy in my country is that riding bicycle or taking public transportation may be friendly to our environment.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because there is a policy in my country that riding bicycles or taking public transportation may be friendly to the environment.

原句中 “they have a policy ... is that” 结构混乱，不能同时使用 “have” 和 “is”。可以使用 “there is a policy ... that ...” 的结构来表达“有一项政策是……”。另外，“riding bicycle” 应改为 “riding bicycles”，因为这里是泛指骑自行车；“the environment” 前通常需要使用定冠词 “the”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because they have a policy in my country is that riding bicycle or taking public transportation may be friendly to our environment.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because there is a policy in my country that riding bicycles or taking public transportation may be friendly to the environment.

表达“某地有一项政策”时，应使用 “there is + 单数名词”。原句的 “they have a policy ... is” 不能正确表达这个意思。注意 “a policy” 是单数，所以使用 “there is”，而不是 “there are”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because they have a policy in my country is that riding bicycle or taking public transportation may be friendly to our environment.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because there is a policy in my country that riding bicycles or taking public transportation may be friendly to the environment.

“bicycle” 是可数名词。这里表示泛指骑自行车这一活动，通常使用复数形式 “bicycles”，因此应说 “riding bicycles”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because they have a policy in my country is that riding bicycle or taking public transportation may be friendly to our environment.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because there is a policy in my country that riding bicycles or taking public transportation may be friendly to the environment.

“environment” 在这里指人类共同生活的自然环境，是特定概念，因此通常要在前面加定冠词 “the”，应改为 “the environment”。