自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm/nhận diện từ: “I have a buy” nên là “I had a bike”, và “in mate” có thể là “bought for me”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu. Bạn nên thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn ai mua xe hoặc bạn thường sử dụng nó ở đâu.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa diễn đạt rõ ý và có nhiều lỗi từ vựng, ngữ pháp: “pies” phải là “bikes”, “my countries” nên là “my country”, và cần dùng cấu trúc “As my country becomes more developed, bikes are less popular than they were in the past.” Hãy bắt đầu bằng quan điểm rõ ràng, sau đó nêu một nguyên nhân cụ thể như sự gia tăng ô tô và xe máy. Cần sử dụng từ nối như “because” hoặc “as” để liên kết ý và tránh lặp từ “more”.

範例: I don’t think bikes are as popular as they used to be in my country. As the country becomes more developed, more people can afford cars and motorbikes, so they rely less on bicycles.

× Yes when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child.

The answer needs the auxiliary verb did because the question uses the past-tense auxiliary did: Did you have a bike...? Add a comma after Yes.

× I have a buy in mate by my father.

✓ I had a bike made by my father.

Because the speaker is talking about childhood, have should be changed to the past-tense form had. The phrase made by my father uses the past participle made in a reduced passive structure. The word bike is also needed to express the intended meaning.

× I think pies are less popular in my country because my countries are are development increase more and more so you less than in the past.

✓ I think bikes are less popular in my country because my country is becoming more developed, so people use bikes less than in the past.

Country refers to one nation, so the singular form country is required instead of countries. Use my country is because the singular subject country takes is. The phrase becoming more developed correctly describes a gradual change.

× my countries are are development increase more and more

✓ my country is becoming more developed

The singular subject my country requires the singular verb is. Becoming is the correct -ing form after is, and developed is the correct adjective to describe the country.

× so you less than in the past.

✓ so people use bikes less than in the past.

The original clause is incomplete because it does not contain a suitable subject and verb. The corrected version uses people as the subject and use as the verb. People is more appropriate than you because the speaker is making a general statement about people in the country.