自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ควรตอบให้ตรงคำถามโดยใช้โครงสร้างอดีต เพราะคำถามถามถึงวัยเด็ก ควรแก้ “wash” เป็น “was” และใช้ “didn’t have” แทน “don’t have” นอกจากนี้ ควรเพิ่มเหตุผลสั้น ๆ เพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น อธิบายว่าคุณเดินทางอย่างไรหรือทำไมจึงไม่มีจักรยาน

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was young. My parents usually took me to school, so I didn’t need one.

建議: ควรเริ่มด้วยคำตอบที่ชัดเจน เช่น “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular...” ควรแก้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ ได้แก่ “by” เป็น “bikes”, “county” เป็น “country”, “my province have a many” เป็น “there are many motorcycles in my province” และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างเป็นลำดับ ควรระบุรายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจงว่าเหตุใดผู้คนจึงเลือกใช้รถจักรยานยนต์แทนจักรยาน

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient, especially in my province.

× When I wash young I don't have a bike

✓ When I was young, I didn't have a bike.

The answer refers to a past period, so use the past form was instead of wash and did not (didn't) instead of do not (don't). The phrase When I was young should also be followed by a comma when it comes before the main clause.

× I think by in my country is not popular because Many people have a motorcycle in my county and my province have a many

✓ I think bikes in my country are not popular because many people have motorcycles, and my province has many of them.

Use the plural noun bikes because the answer discusses bikes in general. Motorcycle should also be plural after many people have because it refers to motorcycles in general. Use many of them instead of the incorrect phrase a many.

× I think by in my country is not popular because Many people have a motorcycle in my county and my province have a many

✓ I think bikes in my country are not popular because many people have motorcycles, and my province has many of them.

The subject my province is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must be has, not have. The verb has agrees with the singular subject province.

× I think by in my country is not popular because Many people have a motorcycle in my county and my province have a many

✓ I think bikes in my country are not popular because many people have motorcycles, and my province has many of them.

A many is not correct in this sentence. Use many of them when referring to a large number of motorcycles that were already mentioned.

× I think by in my country is not popular because Many people have a motorcycle in my county and my province have a many

✓ I think bikes in my country are not popular because many people have motorcycles, and my province has many of them.

The plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are, and the singular subject my province requires has. Matching the verb to the subject improves grammatical accuracy.